Ok, so: one, Gatsby's car is so futuristically dynamic here... Also, is Beez turning to Azi's side? 🥺
MaB
2020-10-06 21:43:05 +0000 UTC
Is Beelzebub about to unknowingly help Crowley and Aziraphale? I hope so!
Atelerix
2020-10-06 19:00:31 +0000 UTC
Thank you Tina, I was too tired to see any mistakes! I’m going to fix them asap!
Alice Rovai
2020-10-06 18:18:19 +0000 UTC
Alice, a few English suggestions: “found you unconscious and brought you here”…. “I don’t have any idea”…. “My head still hurts”….
Tina Rhea
2020-10-06 18:10:37 +0000 UTC
Another vote for Crowley flooring it.
Tina Rhea
2020-10-06 18:10:10 +0000 UTC
Wait that means that they’re in CT (where I live) if they’re renting a home and she hasn’t had their daughter yet 😍
Whiteley Foster
2020-10-06 17:33:04 +0000 UTC
Beez's pose practically jumps out of the page they are so kinetic
CopperBeech
2020-10-06 17:22:36 +0000 UTC
Somehow if Crowley hits Beez and they get discorporared, I know for a fact Fitzgerald is gonna be there and be like:
'That was graphic. I should add it to my book and sell it!'
HoneyBee
2020-10-06 17:18:10 +0000 UTC
ooooh, hurt darlings 😔 it absolutely should NOT be like this, Crowley! 😭❤️
sick_pineapple
2020-10-06 17:17:20 +0000 UTC
For a second my mind went, "Crowley, FLOOR IT!" 🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️