Yes, my will was to have her talking very friendly, in a slangy way! So I should change other parts, maybe? What do you think?
Alice Rovai
2020-08-01 19:10:04 +0000 UTC
Aziraphale is adorable... and it looks like he's about to be eaten alive. (English note in the last panel: Correct English would be "Nice boys have got to have some fun." Without the "have" is more slangy, which is okay, though the rest of Zelda's English here is not that slangy. It's your call if you want her to relax the rules a little there. I don't know enough about how she spoke, but I think it would be in tune with the times. Boy, did I overthink that.)
Tina Rhea
2020-08-01 18:56:51 +0000 UTC
oh, Crowley looks so sad and a bit scared for having to do his job, oh.... π and seems like Aziraphale is in for an interesting night β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
sick_pineapple
2020-08-01 18:25:44 +0000 UTC
I L O V E Ziras hair πππ
Vilaprincia
2020-08-01 18:24:50 +0000 UTC
O. M. Goodness! This is better than I imagined! I wrote something similar to this but this...THIS! π