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Forbidden Love 7

I’m scared too 😟 

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this gave me anxiety 😥

Tony

Will you be releasing an ebook when you finish or print? I’d love a copy, I don’t expect it to be included for patrons I’m happy to pay for a copy. ❤️

Ariana Lipman

Az wants to go away, Gabriel wants him to stay. How could I change the dialogue in order to make it understandable?

Alice Rovai

I’m a bit confused by the dialogue, is Gabriel telling him to stay put (I’m talking to you get your ass back here) and Az is refusing? “You do not go anywhere” seems like it might be a statement or a command. You could say “where are you going?” And “away from here” or “I’m leaving” or “away from you”. ❤️

Ariana Lipman

Man! Gorgeous and I’m on edge!

Ariana Lipman

Fuck you, Gabriel! (and the art is beautiful as usual 😊)

Ever Feather

you draw the fear and worry so beautifully!! but i'm so scared for them!

mellowfishie

AHHH!! Do! Not! Like!

Overused.underrated

Gabriel, you do not deserve to be an angel!

egmon73

UGH I really don't like Gabriel. He's the WORST and abusive. He's a perfect example of the HC that the first fall was the last fall in this universe. That God took Herself away and has no more interest in how the angels conduct themselves.

pyracantha

Gabriel should have fallen for his arrogance.

Tina Rhea


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