Forbidden love 6
Added 2020-01-09 16:31:29 +0000 UTCOh - I’m sure I did a lot of grammatical errors...
(ouch, Gabriel!)
Comments
you're definitely feeling something rather terrible, Gabriel, don't front. You bastard.
Wren Truesong
2020-01-10 21:04:58 +0000 UTCThank you very much!!
Alice Rovai
2020-01-10 07:59:48 +0000 UTCPoor dove! I hate Gabriel...
Samara Lilly (Sandra)
2020-01-10 05:45:17 +0000 UTCI got chills at that 4th panel. Don't hurt Aziraphale!
Tarek Giver of Cookies
2020-01-10 03:43:55 +0000 UTC"I am never wrong"? Pride is a sin, you arrogant ass. You'll never know what they feel.
Tina Rhea
2020-01-09 23:41:20 +0000 UTCGabriel is delightfully intimidating and Az is so lovely and soft and innocent!
Ariana Lipman
2020-01-09 19:48:34 +0000 UTCPerhaps - Were not supposed to feel things for each other? Instead of “feel something for someone”? It’s a bit awkward but you could leave it as it is and call it archaic.
Ariana Lipman
2020-01-09 19:47:45 +0000 UTCLovely work! No, no grammatical errors. The phrase about not feeling something for someone is a bit awkward. Perhaps ...
Ariana Lipman
2020-01-09 19:46:16 +0000 UTCHeads up, I am about to kick Gabriel in his jealous ass.bHands off Aziraphale!! PS: Hey Gabe? Buddy? Jealousy is also a feeling.
Erin
2020-01-09 17:45:08 +0000 UTCGAB PLZ
Kathryn Thompson
2020-01-09 17:18:52 +0000 UTCBecause you jealous bastard hurt him?
Sarah Marino
2020-01-09 16:45:14 +0000 UTC
