Everlasting dream. Chapter 136 — Things we do before sleep
Added 2025-10-03 19:24:47 +0000 UTCAnother one today, and quite a big one, too!☺️ Apologies for the slight delay, needed a bit more time to polish things up. We're now 9 weeks ahead of public release!🎉
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I'm around. Still enjoying the story but don't always feel like saying much. That being said, what I do suspect that unless Nivalis catches those two soon there will bound to be an "accident". Let's see what tomorrow's installment brings. And will these barriers they keep running into be the outer walls of the dungeon? Will they be forced to backtrack to find the entrance that was caved in? Or will they go deeper and do actual dungeon diving? I never really know where this story is going but am enjoying the ride.
Twelve
2025-10-10 03:36:22 +0000 UTCFinally got at the "weekly". Man, I will invest some time after given an proper review on scribehub. But let me bring it here a quicker version. - love the overall feel. - know that the readers dont like chapters that are not focused on the main characters, but your story needs it to the world became ALIVE. For exemple, missing an book part where explain some of the new mosters(lizards and the skeleton). Do it in small portions. - we need to see some more of Nervalis evolution, she still stucked in a place, or you make sure to us that she will not change, or you give glimps that this moral compass will change. Aster in the 5 or 6 chapter have his moral compass switched, besides its beeing to childish, but ok. Maybe this is like that because they are a childs, if you got an time skip the development of this bits became more enjoyable. Ps: I saying as someone that want the story to grow and you as a writer to improve.
Ogami Kami
2025-10-07 21:30:53 +0000 UTCI wonder where the guy that goes by “twelve” is. Bro used to comment on every chap
PRAEMEL
2025-10-06 16:41:11 +0000 UTCOMFG author-san 🥹🥹.. You really did give an early release. RRRAAAAAHHHH ILYSM😚🤭
PRAEMEL
2025-10-04 02:38:49 +0000 UTC
