CH4 Sneak Peek 2.0 (70K WORDS)
Added 2025-04-08 06:02:49 +0000 UTCHello! I came back from a trip to Georgia (in which I completely stopped writing to enjoy myself) and I'm feeling really refreshed! Since Chapter 4 is taking as long as it is, I thought I'd drop another sneak peek to mollify the wait! It's 70k words and while that seems like a lot it's honestly just the "intro" of the chapter LOL
The Challenge will be spoiled. I do ask everyone to keep conversations about it contained in Patreon or private chats/group chats. Nonetheless, I can't stop it but your friendly neighborhood writer Amy is asking for this tiny favor just to keep it fun and surprising for everyone else 𫶠(please)
I don't mind reactions in the inbox but I won't answer until after the chapter is fully out!
Things are bound to change. I'm editing and changing up until the very moment I press publish lolol so nothing is ever concrete. As usual some scenes may be condensed. I usually do my whole "fleshing out" at the very very end of my editing process aka when I'm completely completely done. Hope you enjoy!
Comments
Ok so after reading the most recent release, i'm at a 90% certainty that my band ruined my relationship with seven -_-
sodapulsar
2025-06-28 10:45:19 +0000 UTCThis one was such a tough decision for my super Attached, romancing G, still obsessing over her Ex 7 MC, . She wants to trust Griffin, even though she's hurt, because making him feel rejected will only make her hurt worse, but this is her band, her family. She's "the Leader" sure, but that doesn't give her the right to overrule a vote. They ALWAYS abide by the vote. And if she is willing to put her foot down for this TV Bullshit, what does it say about her that she rolled over when voting out Seven??? The angst as always fuels me.
Laura Letsinger
2025-06-23 01:17:23 +0000 UTCdude, i'm sipping the koolaid. i feel like my band said something to Seven behind my mc's back that idk about that caused everything to be worse, bc my mc wanted them to stay and voted to keep them as co-lead bc the band was OUR baby. and now every time i try to talk about Seven they avoid the conversation? hoooo man when i went against their vote for the advantage and they talked to me about "going against the majority vote" i wish there was an option to absolutely blow up on them. last time the "majority" voted i lost my best friend/lover. i wanted to FLIP edit: if this ages well and i'm right, i'm coming back to chew out my band with a vengeance >:(
sodapulsar
2025-06-02 00:36:38 +0000 UTCMy reason for choosing SV with the band is very in character for my fame hunger confident ambitious MC: I honestly think MC and the band could make any song works lol. Give me the wonderland song my band is gonna make it great. And I'd rather write for SV (Seven to be exact lol) than UW (even though I love you Blake).
Mandy Law
2025-05-22 15:19:03 +0000 UTCAgree with you 100%! We're definitely giving UWB one HELL of a leg up considering Blake's abilities as a songwriter (Blake ilu)....unless MC chooses to fumble, but even then, from what we've seen, UWB are the strongest performers and could work with it. And the band's reasoning for picking SV felt so childish!
Saem
2025-05-21 13:23:36 +0000 UTCLol my reasoning for picking UW is the fact that UW is good but known for their absolutely god awful lyrics from that other chapter, they wouldn't even need to sabotage they could just write one of their normal songs!! That kind of lyrics is heavily reliant on execution and if the MCs band doesn't have that style it's gg Unfortunately it might backfire and make UW win instead since they're really good but bad at lyrics and now possibly getting good lyrics to work with (unless MC drops the ball big time) Also omg I loved the drama with the band all wanting to pick SV and this time you get the opportunity to be the leader, I like how it mirrors the vote except this time MC takes the reigns. I couldn't NOT take that option even if I hadn't already decided to pick UW long before I read the band's arguments for picking SV and G recommending we pick UW? sus I don't trust G's judgement it almost made me doubt the choice but I'm locked in!!!!
GD.B0B
2025-05-20 04:50:48 +0000 UTCViktor is striking me as the kind of guy who likes to be in control of a situation and who has bit gotten a tad bit too comfortable with the kind of power he often holds over people. I see this as his way of trying to have a control over MC, by putting them in a somewhat similar situation as Victoria.
Okami-Nora
2025-05-12 13:29:36 +0000 UTCNot their very best friends turning out to be bullies đ MC seriously deserves to have a breakdown or 5 as a treat đ
Min
2025-05-02 23:27:22 +0000 UTCViktor gives me whiplash lol. First he tells mc to stay away from G then to watch over G? Make ur mind up man! Either way my mc is sleeping with G so you know đ
Paris
2025-05-02 17:55:44 +0000 UTCđđđđ
Denisa-sama
2025-04-28 13:03:13 +0000 UTCBlake won't be so smug when my MC gives them the raunchiest love song about G
Naia
2025-04-28 08:03:48 +0000 UTCor or or being like âi chose uw becauseâŠ.i trust seven đâ
eva
2025-04-27 02:50:42 +0000 UTCbased on a recent tumblr post, it sounds like the 7 POV of the scene with Frankie is on the roadmap
weretoad
2025-04-27 00:51:53 +0000 UTCoff-topic, but is there any chance you'd be willing to write POVs from the first challenge (specifically MC's perfomance; i guess it wouldn't have any choices, but still, i'd be really interested in seeing MC from ROs' eyes in this moment ^^;) and 7's POV from the scene with Frankie? no pressure, i'm just curious if it is something that could happen >< ^^
Svetlana Morgun
2025-04-25 11:11:31 +0000 UTCAugust's "It makes sense" feels like the Calebcity skit 'Basically how trying to stay neutral is.'
Mb Vier
2025-04-24 08:29:32 +0000 UTCOh for fucks' sake, My dumb Sevenmancer ass thought we were doing them a favor by writing for UW so that Seven has the ball in their court when it comes to writing for us, but you are absolutely right... unless Blake fucks up so spectacularly in getting on SV nerves that Seven straight up pulls a Thanatos gambit and messes up the performance to face UW 1v1 (even though that's obviously not happening in week 2 lmao). Whatever the case, I'll definitely have to replay this chapter to see how both choices turn out.
Mb Vier
2025-04-24 07:54:16 +0000 UTCSo many great takes here about the choice and the band! I can see this chapter being a turning point in my MC's personal arc of toxic codependency. The whole discussion of how SV can sabotage the band, meanwhile my asexual and vaguely-uncomfortable-with-sex-stuff MC thinking back to UW's style of writing and on-stage presence... No, no, thank you. Forget any personal drama, it would be such a disaster of a performance. (+ extra layer of resentment towards the band for complete disregard of MC's comfort) While being on the topic and if you don't mind answering, Amy: - as far as I know, the only option to get the asexual flag is while talking with Dakota at the party (a scene you can miss); will there be another chance for that at some point? - will asexuality be actually addressed as an aspect of a relationship with ROs or there mainly to hide more explicit options and flavour text? I would love for it to be the former, but you're already giving us so so much variety in how we approach the romance routes, I fully understand if it's out of your planned scope.
ZOJa
2025-04-21 01:07:45 +0000 UTCNow hold on I had to come back and talk about this because it has been bothering me so much. I hate how Viktor pushes us into Victorias role of becoming Gâs babysitter, because first he criticised us for getting close to them and now that?? Also hate how demeaning he is towards G, like what do you meant the person you pushed into a world of abuse, drugs and manipulation at the age of 16 isnât doing well? I need that man obliterated (oh and I was also very sure heâd try something with MC in that cabby scene, thank god that didnât happen)
Dante
2025-04-17 06:12:41 +0000 UTCThere is a particular line of dialogue that's been bouncing around my skull and I want to grab Corey and say "PUT ME IN A CONFESSIONAL" so I can say "I picked SV because I can't turn down an opportunity to write lyrics for my favorite singer." ENJOY THAT MIND FUCK, SEVEN
emelsi
2025-04-15 18:08:59 +0000 UTCThank you Amy for this delicious feast! And oh man, being able to have the MCâs first time pushing back against the band be over Seven (particularly in the context of musical agency) is poetic cinema and I am here for it.
weretoad
2025-04-15 13:04:01 +0000 UTCseven writing a song for us, getting even closer to o, august moments??? oh i am so excited for this chapter i can already tell itâs going to be amazing (as always)!!!!!!!!
jade
2025-04-14 23:40:20 +0000 UTCPeople want to kick Iris out of the band but honestly I'm like get in line after Devyn lmfao they were SO vicious out of nowhere and for no reason????
Mirai
2025-04-14 22:26:38 +0000 UTCI honestly donât know what is going to come back to bite us more, listening to Gâs suggestions or not doing so. On one hand we have the fact if people knew G âhelpedâ us it would worsen the cheating allegations. On the other hand G might knows some things we donât and listening to them could actually be the better course of action to succeed in the challenge/have a less miserable time as far as we know. Basically I really need Gâs POV for that moment so I can see their thought process. Do they actually know things and are trying to help us avoid a worse fate? or do they maybe just not want uwb to write for us because G has personal issues with blake? On another note I also wonder how Sev would feel if they knew about mc choosing uwb. I mean, Sev might like Mc standing up to the band and going against them (though knowing Sev theyâd probably twist it in some way) but would the fact G âhelpedâ the band affect Sevâs opinion on if they cheated? (I think it wouldnât, but SV might use that as âproofâ to try to convince Sev) Similarly I also need Sevâs thoughts and feelings on having to write a song for mc/having a song written by mc. Because at this point Iâm not even sure which theyâd find worse.
Runa
2025-04-14 22:04:22 +0000 UTCI know it's been days, but I'm still REELING from the "joke" Devyn made. Like, of all people...Devyn???? And then the whole band laughing?? I thought I was stupid for not understanding the punchline. But no wonder, MC WAS the punchline đđ
PrincessDummy
2025-04-14 21:49:42 +0000 UTCI'll be delusional with you bestie idc if it's week two 7 is gonna be atrociously down bad for our MC in public for sure! (they're locking me up as we speak)
willow143
2025-04-14 15:30:35 +0000 UTCI just went through Amyâs tumblr and Amy did say that this chapter had her leaning towards 7âŠ. THATS IT 7 IS GOING TO WRITE A LOVE SONG FOR MC đ€ ( Iâm delusional)
Cam
2025-04-14 14:40:21 +0000 UTCmy sister has several pet snakes, and they always look so goofy that I keep imagining Viktor to have a "C:" smile hahaha. but anyway, this sneak peek is SO GOOD. I'm so excited for chapter 4, I'm gnawing at the bars I actually get the band being mad at MC, though, and vice versa. no, they didn't really give MC a chance to talk, but MC nodding their head at the end... I mean, *I* would've assumed that was agreement? what a mess all around hdgdjdhf hug and make up, guys
Sierra
2025-04-13 14:44:03 +0000 UTCThat'll be something that happens just after what this sneak peak shows I imagine, when we're somewhere more private. The real question is if you can trust the band enough not to let it slip in an interview/to anyone else what G said to MC...
Jord
2025-04-13 10:33:40 +0000 UTCEven though I hate the way the band responded to choosing UW, why wouldn't the MC tell them what G said when they were discussing? Rowan even asks MC's opinion and they don't say anything. I suppose just because they don't want to be disagreeable, but how could you not mention that when it definitely affects the choice?
Mya
2025-04-13 06:10:51 +0000 UTCI'd assume because it's not relevant in this sneak peek, there isn't enough Seb in this snippet for it to be a variable at all so there's no point in setting it.
Julia
2025-04-12 17:40:45 +0000 UTCOMG, not the band mad at me because I went with Griffin advice!! I will not let Blake awful writing get us to lose, please! Once again, Amy, the writing is amazing!! I love it and can't wait for the chapter to be out!! <3
keturah lewis
2025-04-12 05:02:23 +0000 UTCI was thinking about Blake writing the song for SV and realized he can make Seven sing a song about MC. Even the title could be MC's name to everyone else's horror. Because this is Blake and it would be so fun. Granted, it would be a stupid horny sexy song, but now I can't wait to see if this would be the case in reality.
lo6otia
2025-04-12 04:47:58 +0000 UTCSebastian no baby please come back my friends are mad at meeeee ;-; But seriously, MC is really getting put through the ringer and I feel that choosing UW over SV is the better option despite, ya know, the internal conflict. As others have said, I at least have enough trust in Seven for them to write a song for the band and maybe writing a good song for Blake will be enough of a truce? At least a peace offering. AND WAS THAT CORY THROWING US A BONE??? Obviously it was a small one if so and Viktor ruined it, but oh my god, a molecule of mercy. Thanks for giving us the option to snap at Viktor <3
FlamingFlyingV
2025-04-12 03:49:23 +0000 UTCI feel like thereâs no way it can happen this early, weâre only on week 2, but halfway through I think youâll be right. I canât wait for MC to be able to go âwhat are you gonna do then huh? Demote me to backup singer like you did to Seven?â I love the band but they need to get it in check
Bi Bubble tea
2025-04-11 20:28:55 +0000 UTCAbsolutely love how Greek tragedy everything feels with the buildup of all the plots. I honestly have no idea how this will go especially with cheating allegations, seven past haunting the band, ValenMC scandal. Like what do we even write about for the contest đ€ Do you go with UWB or SV? What will they write for us? Will it be brutal but good enough that we don't get in the bottom? It's just so goooooood. Now I'm listening to songs and pinging them if they are UWB/SV coded. But seriously, I've played through it at least 8 times at this point, (code diving is so hard without dashindon đ) I'll still do it again. My MCs must go through every emotiomal loop in this rollercoaster đą đ« Great job Amy!
Tweedle Dee
2025-04-11 19:23:42 +0000 UTCThinking about it, I predict that if the band messes up with this challenge or screws mc over or something like that, I donât think Seven could just sit back and watch it happen (which in turn could affect *their* band because âseven this is a competitionâ). I also feel like this could turn out to be like a The Vote Part 2 situation where the past haunts the present and things between the band and mc potentially get worse, resulting in the band perhaps hurting mc (and accidentally shoving them over the metaphorical edge or something) and Seven canât stop themself from getting involved because they still care so much even if it would benefit their band to just stay out of it. Sev is shown in their car pov to be irritated with the band for leaving mc behind or possibly not âreality checkingâ mc about their parents (âis mc's band just letting them take their parents bullshit with no problem? fuck that bandâ) so if the band continue acting like this if you donât go along with everything they want anymore, Iâd be curious to see whatâs going on in Sevenâs head if they see that.
Rayne
2025-04-11 16:24:06 +0000 UTCI agree that MC's band will lose really badly this time, but I don't think they'll be forced into a face-off, because it would have to be against SV or UW, and both bands would stomp the MC's band into oblivion, at this point. Too many fans hate MC's band, so there's no winning for them. I figure someone else will screw up worse and MC will barely eke by.
EvilChani
2025-04-11 14:10:03 +0000 UTCHonestly this hive-mind thing that the band doesâŠ. Understandable yet infuriating when they expect MC to go with the flow after everything. My poor MC always gets ambushed by her âfriends.â Everyoneâs screwed with the new challenge but I completely expect MCâs band to lose so badly and for Amy to throw us into a face-off with the ghostwriter for our song.
Alerose
2025-04-11 12:49:26 +0000 UTCI'm genuinely hurt by that comment by Devyn loll, like wth I thought they hate /our/ guts! Why is the MC being singled out now?? MC get behind me !! (Anyway amazing sneak peek, super excited for the chapter grahhh<3)
Stupidfied
2025-04-11 02:13:36 +0000 UTCI curse Viktor to always find legos stuffed into his shoes, for his socks to always be slightly damp, and for his pillows to have no cool side.
Stellar Skadi
2025-04-11 00:57:46 +0000 UTCfuck the band <3
Bunny!
2025-04-10 22:15:55 +0000 UTCAgreed! I love this element of her character!!! Sheâs not evil (definitely unempathetic, but itâs not personal) sheâs just struggling to get a foothold in her industry as much as we are, itâs ultimately not her fault reality tv and the music industry execs demand blood đ
Bi Bubble tea
2025-04-10 20:24:07 +0000 UTCG, Sev, Vic, O, Seb and Auggy I love you all... but COOOORYYYY !! I absolutely love how she makes the cast SQUIRM! feelings and personal boundaries be damned she's just trying to make good tv! I'm glad we were given the option to defend her against Viktor- the way Amy describes how she quickly composes herself after enduring what he said to her...AUUUGHHH so good! Oh Cory the ruthless woman that you are, they can never make me hate you <3
MadiMomo
2025-04-10 19:54:58 +0000 UTCI don't think there's a chance in hell of ever going back to being a duo. It's either solo or stay with your asshole band members, lol.
EvilChani
2025-04-10 17:16:20 +0000 UTCI have a feeling it will work out well for Seven. Blake will write one of their sexy songs and Seven--who has better stage presence than anyone except G and, maybe, Blake--will own it. Hell, SV will probably end up winning, especially if MC writes a crappy song for Blake.
EvilChani
2025-04-10 16:59:20 +0000 UTCExcluding August, my sweet summer child
monka
2025-04-10 16:28:19 +0000 UTCNot the band turning into MCâs ops
monka
2025-04-10 16:26:38 +0000 UTCI just realized if the only bands who are left are the mc's band, soft violence and underground wastebasket and mc picks uw. Wouldn't blake have to write for soft violence since soft violence would be writing for the mc's band? Because blake would have to write for someone on the show and the other bands got everyone else... đ§đ«Ł seven watch out
Rose
2025-04-10 14:26:53 +0000 UTCI actually want to see UW win because of the MC's song. It would be a cool dynamic. I suspect the MC winning this round is impossible (the balance to the auto win for the first round), so it'd be cool to have their song win. I'd like to think that would make Blake stop hating on them and trying to ruin them, but I'm not that delulu, lol.
EvilChani
2025-04-10 14:23:29 +0000 UTCWe can be angry at the band and still think it makes them more human and interesting đ€· I doubt Amy wasn't expecting people to be annoyed at the band after this but that's what makes it fun
willow143
2025-04-10 10:03:33 +0000 UTCI must be in the minority of readers who don't hate the band after this preview. Am I frustrated with them for how they are engaging with the MC (both the challenge and discussing Seven) yup - but I'm not angry with them as I think it makes them more human and interesting. I definitely hope that we/the MC gets a chance to properly discuss things with the band as between leaving the MC behind at the fight, and this I really think they are too self-absorbed given everything going on. I'd love to see the situation from their points of view as while we got some insight on Rowan's state of mind, we are missing the others.
gemekaa
2025-04-10 09:50:46 +0000 UTCJust curious but, is there a reason Sebastian isn't available at the beginning when we pick who we've been romancing so far?
chellyense
2025-04-10 09:24:24 +0000 UTCAmazing story (as usual) and I have a lot of thoughts (as usual). - The O running scene was in the last sneak-peak, but MC and O having a heart-to-heart is very sweet, especially considering the band situation... - I don't hate the band or anything, but they're behavour is driving me craaazy. Some of them defend Seven in previous chapters (eg, 'they're not going to start drama' or smth like that), but now they think if Seven writes for the band, they're going to write something terrible for/about them? I assume this is because they've been forced to face the fact that they haven't really 'gotten over' them - the band treats them like a ghost who's going to come back to haunt them. - Regarding 'the choice' UW feels more 'logicial' in my mind. In general I don't think neither Seven or Blake will sabotage MC's band like (it's just a bad strategy), but Seven is shown to be a better writer + understands MC's vocals well. Worst case scenario is Seven puts the band on blast for the vote...but at least you know it's gonna be a great song anyways. Even if SV *didn't* write for the band, writing for UW might just help Blake come around to the band more. Or not, they might just focus on G cheating for the band, rather than the band cheating themselves. - My general prediction is that the band MC writes has a high chance of winning, assuming the right choices are made (or wrong?). Overall, very excited for the full drama of chapter four!
SlyFire
2025-04-10 09:02:06 +0000 UTCviktor is sooo fucked up like. u see cory have an utter lack of interest in respecting staff and the bands and go woah shes like the worst of the worst!! but then This Guy walks in and he has a major Disregard For The Humanity of ANYONE under him to the point that even Worst Woman You Know is more considerate and humane in her treatment of workers and seeing Worst Guy Ever talking to Worst Woman makes you feel genuinely bad for her bc this guy is just that bad!!! he KNOWS g's teenage years as a turbo famous musician are ultimately what made them what they are today, and all he has to say when faced with the reality of it is that they should "just grow up" while making babysitters out of people who he knows cant push back!! dude has a purely monetary Line Go Up view of art and the people who make it and it shows in the most chilling ways!!!! is anyone else scared!!!
mizukilikeer
2025-04-10 08:26:39 +0000 UTC"You're nodding before you even know what you're doing. This is the bad part about being in a band with friends. You feel compelled to follow them to the ends of the earth without a second thought. You don't even know for sure if you agree with their decision. You don't know why you're like that. You've always been a person that's eager to please. You guess that inner-child that fought for your parent's affection never fully went away. It's simply in your DNA." i felt Very smug and vindicated reading this bc i saw someone once saying that mc was selfish and a traitor for not leaving the band w seven, which sat turbo wrong with me basically for that. itd been set up for so long that mc has an unhealthy dependency w the band bc they dont have that security/safety net and self esteem that having a loving family gives you. the band IS their family, while losing seven was heartbreaking as they were also part of that family, regardless of the heightened attachment mc and seven had, losing four friends who are basically family wouldve been just as if not even more fucked. me thinks. so like basically its nice to see it be stated so explicitly
mizukilikeer
2025-04-10 07:53:29 +0000 UTCi had so much faith in the band b4 this like "oh the seven situation was just tough in general!" but nvm fuck them!! im taking ori and auggy with me too. im nothing like yall!!!!
mizukilikeer
2025-04-10 07:40:49 +0000 UTCI think my mc will be going solo at the end of all this or maybe just maybe since Seven dearest also seems to be frustated with SV we can go back to being a du-*gets shot*
Kiki
2025-04-10 07:40:46 +0000 UTCThis sneak peak was crazyyyyy. So first of all the band is so scared of talking about the past and what Seven could say about them- BUT LIKE GUYS WE ARE SO SCREWED IF WE LET BLAKE WRITE FOR US- he could have us say anything and set us up with failure. PLUS VIKTOR IS SO CLEARLY HAPPY WHEN U PICK SV. If Viktor over there smiling and happy with our pick, we did not make a good decision- that man does not have good intentions with our band and is praying on our downfall for views. And tbh I trust Seven. He doesnât seem like the type that would set up the band with a bad written song. So I made my decision- my loyal mc is tearing himself apart over this drama tho.
Amos
2025-04-10 07:31:28 +0000 UTCfueling my solo mc agenda⊠O is coming with me⊠ill beg them to
Jihee Son
2025-04-10 05:04:11 +0000 UTCamyyyy why are my closest friends being mean to me?? :,(
junoiscringe
2025-04-10 03:22:40 +0000 UTCalso I didnât even need Gs input, I feel like with what we know SV is the objective better choice. It doesnât even matter if UW doesnât try to deliberately write a badly written song, they will anyways đđ (luv u Blake) Vs Seven whose a private person and I donât feel like is that evil by himself (maybe with some pushing by his band but we donât know a lot about them yet, other than that they want to win lol.) Also I DO NOOOTTTTT TRUST VICTOR!! That man gives me goosebumps. Even with what little we had of G, I love him this chapter, and seeing MC question whether he writes his own songs or not WAS SOOOO GOOD, especially playing an MC that really idolizes him. I love seeing that idolization slowly get picked away.
Jayla
2025-04-10 02:26:05 +0000 UTCThe band was SOOOOO in this sneak peak. I canât wait till the chapter comes out!! No matter what we choose itâs probably gonna be bad vs worse, but Iâm stoked to see where everything goes, I was tense the whole time lmaoo
Jayla
2025-04-10 02:17:27 +0000 UTCDespite Seven not even looking at MC and walking off to presumably lose their fucking mind over the prospect of MC writing a song for them, I canât help but wonder if some part of them is involuntarily excited about it before all the negativity starts eating a hole in their brain and they spiral for the 5-7 business days. Thereâs so much emotion, so many different angles crammed into just this, Amy, the mind that you have -
Kit
2025-04-10 00:02:54 +0000 UTCI need 7's internal monologue. it replenishes my electrolytes
potato
2025-04-10 00:02:49 +0000 UTCwhat would terrorize 7 more, having to sing MC's song or having to write a song for MC
potato
2025-04-10 00:02:04 +0000 UTCLoved it Amy but also I AM turning into the 5th member of SV this band has run its course and I WILL keep O in the divorce, thank u very much (but fr if they were forced to choose to stay with the rest of the band or MC...what'd happen thođ)
Mirai
2025-04-09 23:22:13 +0000 UTCMy guess is that everyone will have their boot on MC's neck this chapter. And I'm totally hoping for a chance for the MC to crash out spectacularly. It'll be fun... and everyone can stand over them and laugh while they crumble to pieces!
EvilChani
2025-04-09 22:07:39 +0000 UTCYeah, the whole "oh we trusted you to make the right call". Filling that song journal with material for when MC leaves the band and goes solo đ
Doodle
2025-04-09 21:24:59 +0000 UTCalso let my mc buy one too please because the image of wearing the G one while talking to G / buying the Triple A one FOR Triple A is too funny
willow143
2025-04-09 21:09:15 +0000 UTCok amy given that I know you're still checking these comments WHEN and WHERE will we be able to buy those awful innuendo tshirts in real life, the people demand the horny shirts!!!
willow143
2025-04-09 21:08:33 +0000 UTCO basically met the band when they auditioned at Carolina Records, which was the pov thing. Seems the Heavenly Isle audition happened before the big party fight with Seven.
wynthro
2025-04-09 20:52:21 +0000 UTCI wonder what Oâs thoughts are on the bandâs dynamics - I guess itâs possible the toxicity wasnât super visible before now because the pressures of the show are really bringing it out, but the signs were def there. Did they hope the band would behave as mature adults and sort everything out? Did they think it wasnât their place as the manager to step in and say something because they werenât knowledgeable of the interpersonal dynamics? Do they not see it even NOW because of how relatively absent theyâve been? And what will push them into saying something? WHEN WILL THEY TELL MC TO GO SOLO??? đđđ
Mallory
2025-04-09 20:35:41 +0000 UTCThis really solidifies how good at her craft Amy is. Look at us losing our collective shit over 70k words LMAO! I'm soooooo excited for the full chapter 4 release aaargghhh
Doodle
2025-04-09 20:27:09 +0000 UTCLMAO logic! (jk, that's exactly what my MC is HAH!!)
Doodle
2025-04-09 20:24:12 +0000 UTCOmg I just started thinking about this too. If the band really cared about Seven having ammunition then theyâd realize that Seven MOST LIKELY wouldnât go down the petty path (deserved or not) because Seven has too much love for their craft. Impo, venting your feelings out in a song (vaguely) is different from being petty (bluntly). ALSSOOO, Seven hasnât told SV everything that happened. Thatâs known from the POVs. Why in the hell would Seven create a song for the band to perform that would reveal things that Seven doesnât want to publicly announced. Amy has stated in multiple places (in and out of the story) that Seven is a pretty, decently, private person. They donât like their business out there for people to use as ammunition. The big hurdle for me is Soft Violence, not Seven personally, which the band isnât even considering đ Seven this, Seven that. Come on now⊠but maybe Iâm putting too much faith in Seven. If anything I feel like theyâd make subliminals that only the MC and the band understands but nothing like⊠the public would understand. Who knows, weâll see đ€ Excited to see what UWB & SV create!!
wqxian
2025-04-09 20:17:35 +0000 UTCDid O meet the band during their audition for Heavenly Records? I remember there was a short story about it but I think 7 had already left the band by then
Shan
2025-04-09 20:14:37 +0000 UTCAugust is a child of divorce (mc and Rowan)
lu
2025-04-09 19:49:37 +0000 UTCI'm so pissed at our band and so excited to read more and get more pissed LMAO I think this is the first story I've read period where getting annoyed at characters is only strengthening my enthusiasm to keep reading. My poor sweet MC, she's only doing her best and feels like she's drowning all aloneđ„Č
Julia
2025-04-09 19:37:01 +0000 UTCHaha not chapter. Paragraph.
chocolatezz
2025-04-09 19:35:42 +0000 UTCaugust i love you im sorry you have to witness band divorce begin to go down
Rita
2025-04-09 19:28:40 +0000 UTCgod I love your comments youâre making me go insane thinking about all this
Dante
2025-04-09 19:08:33 +0000 UTCI can't help but keep commenting on this sneak peek it has me SO heated on behalf of my MC and somehow the band are the worst people involved in the whole thing so far? because what do you MEAN you're laughing and making jokes about one of your "best friends" who is currently being dragged through the mud by everyone online either because they're breaking up Valenreign or because their relationship with Seven is a 'big hit' OR being accused of cheating which YES the whole band is being accused of that but considering the singer is the face of the band they're obviously getting the brunt of the backlash??? as the leader????? the role that you keep pushing them into but then get mad when they make a decision you didn't agree to as if you even let them have an opinion?????????? ALSO I'm sorry but in what universe do the band think it's in any way appropriate to laugh at Blake and Seven "hating MC's fucking guts" as if 1. the band aren't the ones who literally fistfought UW and caused the vote situation with Seven in the first place and 2. the MC hasn't been put through the wringer enough in the ONE SINGULAR WEEK!!! the show has been happening??? Not to mention the fact that actually jokes on them because Blake AND Seven both dislike the band more than they dislike MC (based on POV's and also my being a shameless flirt don't @ me), and don't even get me STARTED on them not being willing to even discuss Seven with the person who had the closest and most dependant relationship with them... ...I want to make it so clear that all of the above ranting is a positive thing because I'm so invested I swear this is all in good fun and I actually love the drama but omg I just needed to RANT to process it all thank you all for reading if you did lmao đ
willow143
2025-04-09 18:57:24 +0000 UTCi love the band so much but they seriously made me TWEAK in this one. why are y'all laughing about seven and blake hating mc who has done No Wrong Ever. i can't believe them. in retaliation i'm gonna make mc a raging alcoholic.
nico
2025-04-09 15:31:48 +0000 UTCi will be mc's lawyer and all of these toxic people will be heading to COURT. sorry not sorry #justice4mc #mctheydontdeserveyou
chimm
2025-04-09 14:48:04 +0000 UTCchap 4 and im already looking forward to mc crashing tf out
chimm
2025-04-09 14:20:54 +0000 UTCAugust in the vote/fight chapter is going to be that one picture of Spongebob in that messed up hallway. I feel so bad for them they just want to be a part of a band they don't deserve to be caught in this mess đ
Jord
2025-04-09 10:47:04 +0000 UTCI donât even get what they were laughing about đâđŒ I was like âhold up did I miss the joke?â and reread the page but I think MC is meant to be out of the loop?
Dante
2025-04-09 10:13:17 +0000 UTCsame! honestly my highlight from the demo
Dante
2025-04-09 10:06:33 +0000 UTCI have been a Cory stan since day one but this chapter I feel like really out her position into perspective for a lot of people. She got the short end of the stick as well
Dante
2025-04-09 10:03:07 +0000 UTCBelated observation but: Never a good sign when background vocals starts acting out đ
Teo!
2025-04-09 08:32:25 +0000 UTCGood point đ€ although I would think that Blake would be more careful in the early stages of the show, since they think the Band cheated, and is protected by Griffin/the production. Big risk to waste UW's chance!
Saem
2025-04-09 07:33:31 +0000 UTCOh, something I noticed feedbackwise and I don't know if anyone else said. When at the Advantage reveal you have that G has on sunglasses where you can't see their eyes and a few chapters later you start being able to see their eyes being the glasses.
chocolatezz
2025-04-09 07:18:32 +0000 UTCAugust has a lotta âdamn⊠thatâs crazyâŠâ energy this chapter /pos
Bi Bubble tea
2025-04-09 07:16:36 +0000 UTCsneak peek was excellent don't get me wrong im SEEEEEETHINGGGGG at our band rn.
joc
2025-04-09 07:14:28 +0000 UTCsuddenly i want the mc OUT OF THIS BAND. OMFGGGGG
joc
2025-04-09 07:13:29 +0000 UTCI was so excited to write a country rock song for Triple it would have been so funny to just bust out a random banger about the farm life
Bi Bubble tea
2025-04-09 07:11:35 +0000 UTCLiterally! Seven has integrity, whether Blake has any when it comes to this challenge or not, MC has no reason to trust them. At least Seven knows the bandâs style well and will try not to disappoint
Bi Bubble tea
2025-04-09 07:07:13 +0000 UTCSomething that got me thinking rn... even if we choose UW, it can still backfire, right? Can Blake purposely perform badly just to make both UW and MC's band face off? I wonder if that will depend on how you treated them up until now - just like with 7 if you choose SV..(although I don't think 7 would do something like that)
Clark
2025-04-09 06:57:19 +0000 UTCthe band laughing pmo iris and devyn when I catch youâ loved this sneak peek though!
Lozzie
2025-04-09 06:39:37 +0000 UTCjoking aside i loved this soooo much the tension literally had me on the edge of my seat!! your writing is so immersive and i felt the mcâs stress mounting as time went on đ€§ another banger chapter and itâs just a sneak peek omg
sitris
2025-04-09 06:23:48 +0000 UTCtrying to be a âyknow thereâs nuance and im sure the band has their reasons for acting the way they doâ band defender but after this sneak peek mayhaps itâs time to ask sv if theyâre looking for a fifth member frfr . mc can juggle in the background videos they donât even need to sing
sitris
2025-04-09 06:21:06 +0000 UTCMight be going solo idk đźâđš
cowprintluvr
2025-04-09 06:01:00 +0000 UTCIâm usually a band defender but this sneak peeekkkk đđ yeah they deserve these lashings
cowprintluvr
2025-04-09 06:00:45 +0000 UTCsee the fun thing about this chapter is that while my MC is pissed that the band is so against talking about seven, she doesnât SAY anything about it because she too, is an avoidant little ferret. so now weâre all locked in this toxic little circle together yay âïž
nai.
2025-04-09 05:42:42 +0000 UTComg this was so good i actually regret reading it because now i'm trapped in a spiral of hypotheses until i get to see the ending
potato
2025-04-09 05:03:47 +0000 UTCI am so excited to see this challenge and man. If this is the second one ooooouch for the rest. Also. Cheers on everyone just deciding on what the best answer is without any input from me. Feels very much like the vote that they don't want to talk about.
chocolatezz
2025-04-09 04:49:14 +0000 UTCI hope everyone doesnât have their foot on my neck this chapter cause Iâm ready to crash out. Lmaoo
A
2025-04-09 04:31:47 +0000 UTCMannn listen- my mc is about to go to jail soon. I was fine with everyone pissing me off (expected it even) but now my own band? đđ
A
2025-04-09 04:19:47 +0000 UTCThe band being more of a red flag than some of the Ros was not what I was expecting. Devyn in particular. đ€ shady.
Jam
2025-04-09 03:35:34 +0000 UTCThank you for this!!!đ«Ą the last time Iâve visited Virginia Beach I was young so my memory is hazy but haha I may have to take some creative liberties but I will try to be as accurate as possible!
Amy
2025-04-09 03:04:50 +0000 UTCThatâs a mistake! Coding probably got mixed up in the end. The band you choose is the band MC is writing for, the band you donât choose the is band that writes for MC!
Amy
2025-04-09 03:03:21 +0000 UTCwords cannot describe the hold this story has over me đ the fact that you can play an mc that puts the band before EVERYTHING, then the one time (or second if you count the vote over Seven) mc chooses to not follow the band and picks UW, the band completely turns on mc without even listening to mc's reasoning đ can't wait for mc's impending breakdown
Kayla
2025-04-09 02:55:30 +0000 UTCIf MC is experiencing lyrical writers block, it seems smarter to pick UB for this challenge. After all, it would probably be less taxing for MC to write a song for Blake, a virtual stranger with a short history with the band, as opposed to dealing with the psychic damage MC would have to tank when writing a song that Seven would later perform in front of them. At least thatâs my MCâs logic in all this mess lol
out of the blue
2025-04-09 02:44:33 +0000 UTCme writing the lyrics for them like âMC is the best i lieddd Theyre so cool all the timeâ
eva
2025-04-09 02:22:52 +0000 UTComggg i canât believe i predicted the challenge im so hype !!! im also excited for some tension within the band, its about time they talk abt how avoidant theyâve been
hartwyrm
2025-04-09 02:16:54 +0000 UTCEh, I love SevenâŠbut they did do MC wrong.
gemekaa
2025-04-09 02:15:30 +0000 UTCConfused at the challenge reveal, itâs repeated that we're choosing who we're writing for but then if we annonce UW Rowan is disgusted at the the idea of singing their lyrics, what did we choose in the end ?
Mila K
2025-04-09 01:07:35 +0000 UTCMe defending the band before:đ€Ą No, but seriously. I loved the band, but the one sided conversation about 7 had me wishing there was an option to throw myself from the pier.
OneChemicalMango
2025-04-09 00:26:04 +0000 UTCI have been looking forward to this all day, I'm loving it so far. One quick mistake to point out, I am from Virginia Beach and there are no beaches (except Dam Neck, which is a naval base) that any hotels or anyone can block access to in the way you refer to: > Only resort guests have access to this part of the beach this early in the morning As a general rule in the US, beaches are public land and anything up to the high tide line belongs to everyone. Resorts and hotels and homeowners have no right to block access. It would make more sense if it's the boardwalk or just part of the resort property that isn't on the beach itself.
emelsi
2025-04-09 00:13:33 +0000 UTCE 100% took that photo of MC and 7 at the beach, and if I have to guess, there's gonna be a photo about Seb and MC at the bar, now too.
OneChemicalMango
2025-04-09 00:10:45 +0000 UTCCannot wait to write a genuinely good song for UW to perform because I've been hoping for that opportunity since we first met them (wasn't expecting it as the second challenge of the show though, was expecting to have to wait for that) Didn't even need G's advice to pick them, my choice was made as soon as I found out we could choose them. Also shocked seeing how the band reacted to mc choosing UW instead of SV, like mc was going to choose SV just because the band tried to strongarm them into it
Kayla
2025-04-09 00:04:27 +0000 UTCBecoming a Seven apologist was not on my 2025 bingo card but yeahâŠ.. Seven you were right to get out when you did, king/queen SEVEN DID NOTHING WRONG
sunday
2025-04-09 00:00:09 +0000 UTComg i felt crazy when the band all laughed like... ??? esp if you chose UWB and had that fight with the band.. idk they just left a bad taste in my mouth in this sneak peek..
brielle
2025-04-08 23:22:10 +0000 UTCNo that last comment from Devyn⊠seriously WHAT is funny about MC taking the brunt of all this crazy drama?! And canât even talk about her feelings to her closest friends without them dismissing her đ„Ž
Meow
2025-04-08 23:14:33 +0000 UTCYour points are true!! I did consider SV for the fact that MC could⊠probably somehow⊠make UWBâs song sound good asf LOL or what if Blake pulls out some⊠*better* lyrics. I could also believe in Seven, tho itâs been 3 years, we did perform tgt so they could also do well with our song and itâd good for all three of us! Unless Blake butcherâs the song written for them LOL. Either way, CH4 and CH5 will absolutely be movie cinema đđœ
wqxian
2025-04-08 22:11:58 +0000 UTCNo but to just be like. I love you guys but that vote orphaned me. I didnât have my parents. All I had was 7 and Lucy. Iâm with you, and I love you all, but I made a huge sacrifice to be here and I just want an honest conversation in return.
Alex T.
2025-04-08 22:09:16 +0000 UTCI know the band is kinda on everyoneâs shit list right now but Iâm actually the most surprised by Devonâs reaction?? Like Rowan seemed like he could be persuaded and August didnât care either way. Even Iris came around in the end but Devon still seems pissed (OH THEY BOTH HATE ME DEVON? EXCEPT I AM A FUCKING DELIGHT!!!). I really wanna do a group therapy session because low keyâŠI feel like 7 did/said something to them all that makes them so hesitant to talk about. Like I could definitely imagine Iris taking 7âs departure hard privately and Devon maybe being protective because of that.
Alex T.
2025-04-08 22:05:09 +0000 UTCFirst of all: I love O. Would go to war for O, actually. The soulmateism of O/MC will never cease to astound. But, more pressingly: MC's band is far too used to persuading MC to their cause. I understand the codependency on MC's part, unloved/neglected child that they were, and I don't think the band is being malicious on purpose (it's never that black & white), but the sway they have over MC is not sustainable if MC ever wants to live an autonomous and happy life. You simply cannot exist for someone else, no matter how scared you are of ending up alone. MC is capable, talented, they HAVE prospects â friends are not a weakness, a lover is not weakness, but MC simply does not value/love themself enough to maintain healthy boundaries. Again and again, the band denies them their individuality and autonomy â and considering the potential trigger warnings for this chapter, that's some truly heinous shit. Again! I don't think they realize (or WANT to acknowledge) what they are doing, but their dehumanization of MC is so plain and painful and it's so much worse than what Viktor/Cory/etc are doing because they SHOULD know better, they should know why MC is so indulgent to the point of self-erosion, but they don't, or they don't want to. But that, too, makes sense: Their own career/perceived survival is at stake. Either way, I just want MC to be happy and honest â to choose what is right for them and to learn the shape of their own worth (which does not hinge on someone else's perception of them). I think you are an incredible writer, Amy, and the core of the story you are weaving is so subtle at times, so buried beneath the mechanisms of interactive fiction itself, I could/want to write an entire thesis on it lmao
Teo!
2025-04-08 22:04:55 +0000 UTCI'm inclined to believe this is just Blake trying to get a public reaction because in G's CH3 Hotel Room PoV when they're looking at our songbook they think about their own they write in and how they keep it on their being all the time. There was nothing written to suggest G had someone else writing their lyrics, however I know just because it wasn't said then doesn't mean it can't be changed for the now. But the idea of G having had a ghostwriter is delicious. Especially if it's someone early on in their career G threw to the dirt once they got a hang on things. And we know it can't be Blake for obvious reasons.
Jord
2025-04-08 22:03:06 +0000 UTCAlso, Im surprised that nobody has commented about this, but IF Gina truly uses ghostwriters a la Drake, then I can't wait for the crash out in the next episodes. Like, scandal... Or maybe not
koma
2025-04-08 21:27:53 +0000 UTCsomething something Blake thinks you're too good for the band who are constantly stomping on your feelings... đ
willow143
2025-04-08 21:27:22 +0000 UTCtbh thinking about it more and i understand why one might prefer UGWB writing for the band because if SV writes for the band its gonna be sooo bad for mc no matter what đ like imagine if sev writes the most honest, gutwrenching song about how mc betrayed them and mc is not only forced to perform it but if it goes well then u get the âband only won bc sev wrote itâ truthers and if it goes bad then u get sev feeling some typa way that u butchered their song đ like donât get me wrong i would also prefer SV write for the band but i can see why one might think UGWB writing wouldnt be so bad bc like⊠yeah⊠their lyrics suck but i believe in mcâs ability to serve cunt on stage like if it works for blakeâŠ
june
2025-04-08 21:20:07 +0000 UTCJaded MCs saying this only for it to happen several chapters later is going to be, as the kids say these days, absolute cinema. I am fully expecting and bracing for it to actually happen. Even more so because my MCs have been thinking about dipping since that vote happened.
Jord
2025-04-08 21:18:52 +0000 UTCNot the band once again putting MC's feelings aside for their own benefit? Voting Seven out without considering how it would affect their feelings and their relationship; pressuring them to choose the SV bus and be in close proximity to Seven without thinking how MC would feel being around them all the time; now pressuring MC to choose SV for the challenge, forcing them to write a song for the one person that used to mean the world to them, and not considering how emotionally taxing that might be, all while brushing off what happened like it meant nothing and refusing point blank to even talk about it. MCs who aren't over Seven are in the trenches right now because of their own band's lack of consideration for their feelings time and time again, this is so unfair to themđ
Ashleigh
2025-04-08 21:17:04 +0000 UTCOhâŠour band really is a little toxic huh
luckyelixir
2025-04-08 21:11:17 +0000 UTCwhy am i sensing a "what, you're going to vote me out too?" coming from mc this chapter
Clark
2025-04-08 21:06:19 +0000 UTCTo add on to this, the lyrics from Seven wonât be purposefully bad quality because of the âbottom two have a Face-offâ rule. Itâs just about having good strategy đ it makes me upset that the band doesnât see that
luckyelixir
2025-04-08 20:59:24 +0000 UTCSneak PEAK is right this was so good!! Never thought I could feel this bad for Cory but damn Viktor sure proved me wrong
Jonah M.
2025-04-08 20:56:18 +0000 UTCI think most of us can agree that choosing Underground Wastebasket was the way to go. 1) Blake sucks at writing. 2) I donât think Seven is capable of writing something bad objectively speaking. The lyrics will be emotional but they wonât be bad quality wise. 3) (again) BLAKE SUCKS AT WRITINGGGGG
luckyelixir
2025-04-08 20:54:56 +0000 UTCBegging pleading on my knees for the code to be available. Also this is SO GOOD
StyxAndStones
2025-04-08 20:52:22 +0000 UTCi can tell this chapter is REALLY gonna up the ante with mc's relationship with the band. i was def playing as a people pleaser that puts the band above everything but after this chapter i think ill switch to feeling resentment towards the band for always blaming mc for everything AND for not acknowledging what they did to seven was fucked up đ€đ€ i am here for the dramaaa
libb
2025-04-08 20:24:37 +0000 UTCI know Blake is an ass, but I also wonder if this whole situation with the band - specially if you choose UW -is kinda one of the reasons Blake is only apologetic to you - in their romance, at least..
Clark
2025-04-08 20:14:59 +0000 UTCYou'e not the only one! The fact that everybody except MC knew about the vote is so interesting. Makes me think that there really was something between the band and Seven that we don't know about. And they were suspiciously insistent not to let Seven write a song for us, even though it is obviously the lesser evil. It was Blake who swore to destroy us after all. And while I don't trust other Soft Violence members, I think Seven has at least enough pride as an artist not to give us a shitty song.
Wonderfufu
2025-04-08 20:00:36 +0000 UTCCan we vote Iris out of the band??
Julie McCormack
2025-04-08 19:58:42 +0000 UTCi dont see anyone else talking about this but i do not trust e one bit!! why are they always showing up at the most suspicious moments!! đ
rowan
2025-04-08 19:52:22 +0000 UTCOh! Havenât seen it mentioned yet - CORY!!! I have been doubting my MC being so nice to her so far. But - but, Cory was trying to be nice!!! I was so glad that option was there to defend her from Victor!
gemekaa
2025-04-08 19:38:45 +0000 UTCAgreed. I too thought that was strange. (Re: the band preferring to have Blake possibly write their song vs Seven). For all their flaws, Seven has never once publicly trashed the band or the MC. Meanwhile the cheating allegations all started from Blake. It wasnât even a question in my mind who I thought the better choice would be lmao. Maybe Iâll be proven wrong but I honestly donât think Seven would purposefully write a bad song for the band. Theyâre petty yeah but they keep their pettiness (mostly) out of the public eye. It probably is the guilt and their general need to avoid the topic of Seven as much as possible. I am glad that the MC seems to be getting the chance to kinda call them out on it.
Danielle
2025-04-08 19:24:57 +0000 UTCAhh you're right! Thank you <3
Amy
2025-04-08 19:24:31 +0000 UTCAlso thereâs a line when you pick UW, maybe itâs misplaced? âUnderground Wastebasket writing a song for usâ Rowan says, looking sick âweâre so fuckedâ Which is a little confusing since we are choosing who to write for. When I read this I thought I picked wrong or misunderstood the challenge. đ«Ą
Cam
2025-04-08 19:21:56 +0000 UTCReally hoping Blake's going to have a confused look reading the song we write for them and we can go, "Yeah, I know you're not use to seeing what good lyrics actually look like," or something to that effect
Jord
2025-04-08 19:17:33 +0000 UTCI thought it was weird how the band worried more about 7 writing a song than UW. Blake being a terrible song writer aside they can make up whatever they want and only fuel the cheating allegations. But I think itâs the bands guilt toward what happened with 7 that makes them think that 7 is out for revenge đ€ which makes total sense to me.
Cam
2025-04-08 19:12:50 +0000 UTCItâs a really well-thought out challenge! And itâs great to see thereâs actually incentive to do well because my first thought was that every band would just sabotage each other. Itâs definitely a no brainer picking UW though - Botb would see MC dead before they see MC sing Blakeâs hot wonderland lyrics shudders
Killikat
2025-04-08 19:04:30 +0000 UTCamy reality tv NEEDS u đ
june
2025-04-08 18:43:26 +0000 UTComg i have been sooooo excited to learn this challenge and never in a million years would i have guessed itâs this⊠like aside from the obvious of how batshit crazy this challenge could go for either choice but also the tension between mc and the rest of the band for either going with what they want but not what mc wants or going with the (imo) more reasonable option that is going to cause discord within the band bc of their refusal to talk about The Incident⊠amy ur brain is so big and wrinkly and juicy and if this is challenge 2 i am so scared for what u have in store for challenge 3 đ
june
2025-04-08 18:40:09 +0000 UTCSo.... I love Triple, and I love O even more now. I didn't think it was possible for me to hate the band any more than I already did, but I really can't stand any of them anymore, save for August. G... I think G gave good advice, but in the end, it doesn't matter if it is UW or SV writing a song for the band, they'll both try to screw the MC over as hard as they can (especially SV with Pope and Avina giving MC the stink eye). The only saving grace is that they'd have to do a face off against MC's band. I think, for that reason, G is right--Blake has absolutely no doubts UW could stomp the MC into the ground, at this point, and would intentionally write an even worse song to get them out of the competition, since they know they can win the face off. SV... I think everyone but 7 wants to completely destroy and finish off the MC, at this point, since they're already down. I am not sure 7 will go along with hit, and though 7 knows SV would win hands-down in a face off, I don't think they want that right now, so they won't completely screw the MC. They'll make a song bad enough so that the MC has no chance of winning and will come in near the bottom, but they won't try to knock them out right now. Therefore, they are the lesser evil. On the ambush vote flashback... was it me or did it seem like 7 knew it was coming and it was only the MC who got ambushed? The fact that it was an ambush just solidified the fact that all of my MCs will be going solo when this is over. Fuck the band. And I want the MC to be able to rage at them about the ambush. I felt bad for Cory. Even my wussiest MC would stand up for her against Victor. Cory is a damned bitch who salivates over destroying the MC emotionally (and would probably cream herself if the MC tried to commit suicide on camera), but she didn't deserve that treatment. It was clear Victor preferred MC to write a song for SV so UW could knock the MC out of the show this week, because he knew that was a 100% thing. He seems to know SV will try as well, so it's a lesser choice, but still what he wants. He really wants the MC gone, and will do what he can to sabotage them without coming right out and throwing them off the show... yet. I really appreciate the "be silent" options now--my MC is talking no more than necessary and caving in on herself. I'm hoping to see more of the "I want to walk into the ocean and disappear" options, too, because my MC is borderline suicidal already. At the end of this week, she just might take that long walk off of a short pier.
EvilChani
2025-04-08 17:53:27 +0000 UTCI think mc deserves to drink the rest of the bottle of brandy after hearing the band laughing like that omg (my own mc's thought process is going to start looking like seven's at this point)
Rayne
2025-04-08 17:18:20 +0000 UTCHOLY SHIT đšâïž No lie I normally am all for the band but this sneak peak has me thinking FUCK THE BAND MC GO SOLO đŁïžđ€Źâïž
Parson
2025-04-08 17:11:27 +0000 UTCđ
Amy
2025-04-08 16:56:32 +0000 UTCPetition to throw Donny's snow cone in Viktor's stupid face â
A sandwich
2025-04-08 16:53:00 +0000 UTCOof. I really donât understand how the band worries more about Sevens lyrics MORE than Blakeâs. But it is a knee jerk decision, and they havenât (let the MC) talked about what Seven said to MC last chapter.
gemekaa
2025-04-08 16:39:11 +0000 UTCYou know, I was having a pretty shitty night then you gifted us this and I got to see how much shittier MCâs life is so it oddly made me feel better lol so thanks for sorta cheering me up in a weird way! P.S. If we pick UW for the challenge, does that mean theyâre the band writing the song for SV? If so I kinda regret my choiceâŠ
Vinny
2025-04-08 16:11:07 +0000 UTCThank you and yessssss youâre right, Iâll add that! I need to remember to add more diverse romance options ! đźâđš
Amy
2025-04-08 16:09:29 +0000 UTCI am suddenly so stressed all over again. How the fuck do you manage to up the ante every time??? You're too good, Amy. honestly, my only ask at this point is a shy flirting choice or two for Blake once in a while, but other than that I am in AW of what you've done.
Sarah Mooney
2025-04-08 15:52:12 +0000 UTCPLEASEEE let there be an option to call the band out for laughing at the end đ after everything going on i need the mc to be like "whats so funny" (this isnt an actual demand im just flabbergasted the band had the nerve to laugh after Everything)
Rose
2025-04-08 15:43:37 +0000 UTCyour comment on the band cornering MC both with the vote and now in the present is SO real I'm actually so annoyed at them and we've only gotten one week into the show and now 70k words into the second week like??? at this point I'd be surprised if my MC hasn't physically scrapped with the band by the mid-point of the show nevermind the end
willow143
2025-04-08 15:20:42 +0000 UTCThe TENSION is in full force. For like...everyone. G and Vic oof. G and Blake omg. Band and MC heh...Going against the bands majority vote for the challenge has me like đđ I continue to love and cherish Triple A. Also Viktor?? What gives, you slimy man ugh. Tysm Amy for the content! It's soo good
Sadie
2025-04-08 15:19:15 +0000 UTChonestly maybe this says more about me but the fact that Iris tries to throw the whole "oh I see so because we're not SINGERS we don't MATTER" when MC says they don't want to sing lyrics that Seven has written is bonkers like I'm sorry I don't actually think playing an instrument will be as emotionally taxing as actually singing the damn words that your ex bff/partner has written for you when you used to be a DUO
willow143
2025-04-08 15:17:20 +0000 UTC...my poor MC can't catch a break >< ^^. on the positive note, i think his opinion on Cory has (slightly) improved ^^. i do have to ask though, otherwise i'm gonna be agonizing over it: does it matter (for Seven-mancers, in that case ^^;) who we choose?
Svetlana Morgun
2025-04-08 15:16:51 +0000 UTCGlad to hear that you took a break, hope that it was good and you got to relax and enjoy it Amy!! ^^
Maydayknight
2025-04-08 14:38:04 +0000 UTCThe little flashbacks to the night of the fight with SevenâŠâŠâŠ.Iâm shaking
Hannah
2025-04-08 14:22:35 +0000 UTCGagged!!!
Hannah
2025-04-08 14:20:38 +0000 UTCI loved it
Kiki
2025-04-08 13:58:46 +0000 UTCAhh thank you!
Amy
2025-04-08 13:43:41 +0000 UTCLook man. Seven might hate me but theyâd never write a bad song and I trust that more than Blake who will absolutely sabotage me any day. Obvious answer really
Jamie Martin
2025-04-08 13:16:35 +0000 UTCVictor is such a sleaze. Was half expecting a hand on mcs thigh instead of the shoulder!
Kat Voight
2025-04-08 13:02:11 +0000 UTCI now wonder, are we going to see the bands perform the songs in this chapter already? đ
Clark
2025-04-08 12:43:23 +0000 UTCI also loved G and Victoria so far despite their almost minimal appearances. Imagining Victoria and O sitting on a blanket together is giving me life
Dante
2025-04-08 12:39:02 +0000 UTCI loved this sneak peak but I genuinely donât understand why the band would want to pick SV not UW to write a song for. Blake canât write for shit so a bad song would be guaranteed and Seven isnât the kind of petty person who would blast all their personal stuff in a song
Dante
2025-04-08 12:23:00 +0000 UTCIt's so goooood aaaaahhhh!
Doodle
2025-04-08 12:21:29 +0000 UTCCan't wait to read!!!
Nessy Lovegood
2025-04-08 12:11:06 +0000 UTCIris being one of my faves in the previous sneak peek and becoming my least fav in this one omg August is now my fav from the band idc
willow143
2025-04-08 11:34:58 +0000 UTCOmg I was kind of in the right vein-I thought bands would have to swap lead singers and perform as opposed to writing songs for each other!! Also 10/10 for Sebastian absolutely BOOKING it outta there that mental image is so funny to me. Sebastian âif it sucks hit da bricksâ Retrieverman (I donât remember his last name)
Alex T.
2025-04-08 11:11:45 +0000 UTCmy eyes just snapped open like a sleeper agent!!!
telephonerust
2025-04-08 10:54:24 +0000 UTCoh⊠the band, the beach, the cory, the everything⊠I feel like so many things are coming tgt in my head rn, iâm connecting the dots trust (going to be thinking about this for the next year) I was flabbergasted at all the flashbacks like omg!! AND NOT MIA BEING TAKEN AWAY FROM US MY SHAYLAAA, missing in action indeed⊠triple my king come save me pleek, uâd never betray me (hopeful delusional) also safe to say, safe to flex, i have great survival instincts with the challenge (delusion pt3) đââïž seeing the difference was insane and i nearly threw my phone a couple of times⊠Amy!! you rlly know how to create suspense and make me nervous LMAO. Things are crackinnnngg⊠all we need is Dakota <33 going to brainrot forever again !!SPOILERS!! why does the band have so much doubt in Seven? (besides the obvious but like?? devyn saying "No. Seven is smarter than to start drama. $!{sevenhe}'s never been the type anyway and ${sevenhe}'s not going to start now, not when we have so much to lose." in the prologue) đ especially with Rowanâs, letâs tour tgt with SV. Super interesting lol. They have no respect for Sevenâs craft and, I donât have faith in Seven that they wonât blow MC over bc itâs MC (i do, for the soulmates lore), but bc they care too much abt writing & music to ever do some petty shit like that⊠maybe iâm wrong </3 Also what exactly is the band so nervous over? What ammo could Seven possibly create abt yâall and make (emphasis on MC, yeah Iris.) yâall performâŠ? UGHH and the choices if you pick UWB!! made me so angry!! contradictions are strong (and long were, especially the projections and putting it all on the MC yet at the same time saying theyâre there for MC, etc) weâre seeing their true colors hm (i never wanted to fight devyn before, thatâs my baby, but wtf was that last comment??? HELLO?) Need to peek in their brains. I have sm to say but i will sit and vibrate off my bed onto the floor in silence. Also, thinking about how Jazzy used to be the second closest member in the band next to MC to Seven and her not being present sigh sigh, I wonder how sheâd feel!! Itâs just interesting to see how the dynamics unfold⊠hmmm⊠anyway! Hope you had fun on your trip Amy, thank you for the treat I literally just finished my quarter n needed this bad /nopressure shshd đđ Take care of yourself!! edit: also while brushing my teeth i thought abt the parallels between the vote and what the band is doing⊠HMMMMM such is many thoughts⊠cornering mc7 with a majority vote n trying to guilt trip MC if they chose UWB⊠yeah.
wqxian
2025-04-08 10:43:41 +0000 UTCThe demo made me realize just how self-conscious I am, I couldn't even bring myself to properly read how the characters reacted to the MC's choices. I screamed when I was reading O's scene but boy I'm so screwed đ„Č
Summer
2025-04-08 10:31:52 +0000 UTC70k word sneek peak? Is the entire rest of the book in chapter 4? Amy you're insane! đ€Ł
Jacqueline
2025-04-08 09:44:31 +0000 UTC"That's all. I'm not sure why but Gina favors you. You've probably noticed his shitty mood today." Pronoun inconsistency with Gina jsyk
đ
2025-04-08 09:39:26 +0000 UTCOkay. Wow. What a sneak peak. The idea that this is a fraction of what the chapter will have to offer? Get yourself a holiday after this, Amy, you definitely deserve it. The Challenge? My main hopes were we'd either be writing for another band or singing for another band for BOTB. I can't believe one of them is actually happening, and there's plenty of weeks left for the other to happen as well... But it was incredibly cruel of you to dangle writing for Missing In Action in my face only to snatch it away. And those teasing flashbacks to the vote? The party? There is so much dread there that that chapter is going to make MC going through BOTB look like Disneyland in comparison. Can't wait!
Jord
2025-04-08 09:39:01 +0000 UTCDEATH BY A THOUSAND CUTS FOR MY GUY'S MENTAL HEALTH.
Kenza Breton
2025-04-08 09:37:47 +0000 UTCmc is god's strongest soldier oh my god
Kenza Breton
2025-04-08 09:27:21 +0000 UTCalso the band? THE BAND? thinner and thinner ice every single day I swear
willow143
2025-04-08 08:57:47 +0000 UTCnot gonna spoil the challenge in the comments to avoid people seeing it before they read it but CALL ME THE ORACLE CUS I FREAKING KNEW ITTTTTTT HAHAHAHA AMY U EVIL GENIUS I KNEW ITTTTTTT
willow143
2025-04-08 08:56:47 +0000 UTCTHE CHALLENGE. BEACH SPAT. OOOH MY GOD.
kira
2025-04-08 08:53:41 +0000 UTCFREAKING OUT HELLO?!?!??
kira
2025-04-08 08:51:00 +0000 UTCthat happened to me too!! đ
kit
2025-04-08 08:45:46 +0000 UTCLove you Amy!! Oh and also I just tried to play Seven and Blake's off-page scenes from December 2024, but cogdemos says the pages don't exist anymore?? Could u look into that if you have the time? Thank youâĄâĄâĄ
Mirai
2025-04-08 08:15:43 +0000 UTCOh this is soooooo, I am so interested to see how these choices play out đđ SPOILERS if u didnât read > this challenge is gonna be so interesting omg, canât wait to see if Nikkiâs lil trust fall w seven backfires, the band not talking about seven weirdly puts them in a position to really not understand his logic for choosing Sev to write for them instead of writing for sev (i love my somehow codependent exes) anyway đ speaking of the band, the lil cracks w the band this chapter,,,, canât wait for that to be resolved completely peacefully đ LOL this was soooo good im so excited to see how the rest of the chapter unfolds, this is exactly the things Iâve been waiting for. Also if u read this, ty for indulging my word vomit ab my son, I needed to put that somewhere đ
Night-Triumphantt
2025-04-08 07:59:02 +0000 UTCThe band being awfully out of tune with MC, the general existence of Viktor, the damn fucking challenge... I just want violence
koma
2025-04-08 07:56:36 +0000 UTCSeconds away from murdering someone in this show
koma
2025-04-08 07:49:17 +0000 UTCalso G practically ogling MC zoo wee mama!
sena
2025-04-08 07:28:55 +0000 UTChehe i knewwww that was going to be a challenge eventually... love it. also can't waiit for my MC to lose it @ the band. she loves them but omg... it gets to a point
sena
2025-04-08 07:28:30 +0000 UTCthis is so JUICY i love it đđ«¶đŒ
luhxx
2025-04-08 07:25:35 +0000 UTCHi Amy, any chances you'll allow for code diving for these snippets? I love reading through the many branches after I'm done with a couple playthroughs. Especially with the options my MC would never choose đObviously, it is totally cool if you're not keen on that.
gombocman
2025-04-08 07:20:16 +0000 UTCthat scene with O??? The hands??? I fell. I giggled. I'm going to sleep happy today heheheh
Clark
2025-04-08 07:19:38 +0000 UTCJust finished it! geez what a mess đ I'm terrified of what's to come but also really excited
Clark
2025-04-08 07:13:53 +0000 UTCI HAVE CLASS, BUT TRUST I WILL PLAY WHEN I GET HOME
elyelysia
2025-04-08 06:59:08 +0000 UTCFuck work I'm reading this rn in the workplace
y
2025-04-08 06:55:04 +0000 UTCOOPS lol i fixed it! I usually make a separate file for sneak peeks and intros and I always mess something up lolol it's a canon event atp
Amy
2025-04-08 06:12:05 +0000 UTCoh hell yeah more peak sneak peeks from Amy!
Sadie
2025-04-08 06:11:03 +0000 UTCIâve already noticed first error but WE HAVE TO choose stage name đđ idk if itâs should be like this
bumbo_wenus
2025-04-08 06:06:33 +0000 UTCIM IN CLASS RN AHHH I LOVE YOU AMY
Valentin
2025-04-08 06:05:56 +0000 UTCI'M IN CLASS ARHFBFJFJHHH CHEWING ON A TABLE
capricule
2025-04-08 06:04:52 +0000 UTChell yeah! Excited to read it!!
Clark
2025-04-08 06:04:11 +0000 UTCi have something to live for. thank you. so excited to play this after work omggggg
olive
2025-04-08 06:03:45 +0000 UTCYES! Was literally laying here the last thirty minutes looking for something to read!
Will Landrum
2025-04-08 06:03:36 +0000 UTCAMY.
olive
2025-04-08 06:03:29 +0000 UTC
