E Valentine's Short [5.3k]
Added 2024-06-16 18:26:29 +0000 UTCE's short is here! And it's 5.3k words! This one is short for a few reasons.
1) I tried doing the usual "angst angst hint about route" deal but I realized even beating around the bush might be too spoilery for E's route. It was just too glaring every time I tried lolol
2) E is also more underdeveloped compared to the ROs and I want to let that unravel slowly in the demo so consider this the equivalent of dipping your toes in a pool to check the temperature hahahah I hope you enjoy it anyway <3 As always, I'm all ears for errors and/or typos!
Comments
Amy, you have a gift for creating such vibrant characters!!! I am once again falling in love with someone new. Some lines I noticed errors for: and he's always been clear about her feelings but there's never been a real conversation between you two. Eliott knocks on your door the moment you step back, and 2you give yourself one last look before you head out. Nudge him. "How are so smooth?"
Dani
2024-06-17 18:15:55 +0000 UTCThough it was very fluffy, the "youre ruining my plans" part makes me think that MC just really attracts super complicated people. At this point i wont be surprised if E betrays us HAHA. Thanks for another valentines short it was great as always!
janeydove
2024-06-17 01:36:51 +0000 UTCYou toy that line of angst plus happy valentines plans real well. I don't know what Es thing is but it is a perfect segway into ruining their plans, making me think they are the epitome of right person wrong time, and what a trope to be in. If it's the wrong time for MC or E then how does it end?! These sub romances are going for the throat. Amazing as always!
Tweedle Dee
2024-06-16 23:20:03 +0000 UTCsorrows sorrows prayers (to myself)
bea
2024-06-16 23:02:21 +0000 UTCAnd I thought Dakota was the enigma RO...OK E, I SEE YOU. E's always been a bit off my radar so far but now they're firmly ON IT. Infamous is gonna be the first IF where I romance the entire damn cast.
Sadie
2024-06-16 22:01:42 +0000 UTCMy money is on e working for a tmz style news outlet to do an undercover expose on the show.
Klos
2024-06-16 20:15:06 +0000 UTCSO. CUTE. AHHHHHH another RO to the roster my emotions are going to be everywhere
notionals
2024-06-16 20:09:38 +0000 UTChehe
Amy
2024-06-16 20:05:16 +0000 UTCLMSHSHSHSH basically MC with every RO: *fire everywhere* "this is fine"
Amy
2024-06-16 20:05:12 +0000 UTCit was so hard not writing angst every line I was like "what have I become who is this new Amy" lmaoadhdhbs
Amy
2024-06-16 20:04:52 +0000 UTChehehe
Amy
2024-06-16 20:04:31 +0000 UTCGOOD LUCK WITH THAT LMAO
Amy
2024-06-16 20:04:23 +0000 UTCLOL
Amy
2024-06-16 20:04:12 +0000 UTC👁️👁️
Amy
2024-06-16 20:04:07 +0000 UTClolololol
Amy
2024-06-16 20:03:52 +0000 UTCThanks for the catch! <3
Amy
2024-06-16 20:03:46 +0000 UTC"Has the universe finally become kind to you? Or is this simply the calm before the storm?" (chuckles) I'm in danger
bea
2024-06-16 19:47:11 +0000 UTCE: *waving a thousand red flags and warning signs* Me/MC: that sign can't stop me because i can't read
Ashleigh
2024-06-16 19:45:20 +0000 UTC“you’re ruining my plans. you weren’t supposed to ruin my plans.” WOAH WOAH WOAH WOAH WOAH
junie
2024-06-16 19:41:52 +0000 UTCit's official I'm romancing EVERYONE
bea
2024-06-16 19:26:09 +0000 UTCi love e 😭😭 this valentines special felt so nice and wholesome then the ending… WHAT IS E HIDING WHAT IS THEIR DEAL I NEED TO KNOWWWWwwww
mercy newbury
2024-06-16 19:20:33 +0000 UTC*sigh* adds new romance route to the list
Clark
2024-06-16 19:18:34 +0000 UTCanyways i'm now very suspicious of E. that will not stop me from flirting though bc i want my mc's love life to be as messy as possible💯
Jules
2024-06-16 19:09:14 +0000 UTCi know it probably wasn’t intentional and totally irrelevant, but the fact that the picture in the car mc puts their head on e’s shoulder just like seven put theirs on avina’s shoulders on that one picture made me go 👁️👁️
Ash
2024-06-16 19:07:08 +0000 UTCSmall pronoun mistake I found for male E. "Eliott is kind—so much kinder than what you're used to—and he's always been clear about her feelings but there's never been a real conversation between you two." This is on the first page I believe
precious
2024-06-16 19:06:42 +0000 UTCruining E's plans??? what is up their sleeve....is this why they keep popping up at opportune times....much to think about
Jules
2024-06-16 19:04:15 +0000 UTCLMAO so eerie right....🤭
Amy
2024-06-16 18:59:14 +0000 UTCthat little moment when E suddenly stops smiling and says mc is ruining their plans was a little chilling ngl😭
MaoTheGreat
2024-06-16 18:56:51 +0000 UTClolololol
Amy
2024-06-16 18:55:44 +0000 UTChahaha yeah! I'm not used to the sweetness either tbh! But it was a nice change to flex my "fluff" muscles lol
Amy
2024-06-16 18:55:37 +0000 UTC👀👀👀 I’m watching you, “Mr/Miss. Keller.” If that is your true name…….
Georgia Young
2024-06-16 18:52:14 +0000 UTCI dont know much about E yet so finding out more about them in this short was really fun! They are a bit too sweet for me right now, but definitely a nice breather between the more angsty romances, so Im excited to see more of them in game^^
Eden
2024-06-16 18:45:38 +0000 UTCAhhh thank you! They were really fun. I should do more prompt stuff like this haha
Amy
2024-06-16 18:42:59 +0000 UTCCongrats on finishing the Valentine’s shorts!
sunday
2024-06-16 18:35:32 +0000 UTC
