A little bit rough and scribbley yet! I think this will make more sense as I clean things up and reframe some elements. The process of cleaning up the first pages has led to al lot of fussy little changes and I expect it will continue here.
I've started working on thumbnails for the next few pages as well but then I had a different idea for the choreography that I thought could be really fun and it's forcing me to reconsider.
I like caring a lot about the details, things like the coreography, because I think that has erotic significance, not just what positions characters get into, but how and why they get into them. It gets me into a little bit of trouble sometimes because I end up thinking too long about things instead of just forging ahead.
I try not to get too high-minded about the substance of these stories, lest they lose sight of what they're intended to be, which is just the most fun and artful porn/erotica I can possibly make. But I have been thinking a lot about fate and destiny lately and I guess it's coming through here and it's making the dialog harder to write.
Maybe it will end up reading just like all my other works but I think having the question of "what does fate, love, destiny mean to these characters?" is giving me different options for what they say and do to each other than I would have considered previously.
Aaanyways, Happy Thursday 💕 Don't forget to vote in the CYOA poll!
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