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This is AMAZING

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The ending was funny. - I was going to complain that when I’m down and out, I can’t follow so many different pictures and scenes, and that I‘d rather have a little maintenance of my trance, as too many different pictures will break my concentration und lead me to resurface. But in light of the ending, I can see the need for the secretary scene earlier… Another thing to keep in mind: you need to give me a little time between trigger words to react. Per each breath / sentence I think one would be enough. Stacking three or four different words within the same breath / sentence is like giving too many commands at the same time. „Swell“ was properly introduced and really had the intended effect. While „throb“ is close enough, I don’t actually see the additional benefit: I‘d rather have more repetition and time to react. What’s the hurry? - I mean: ok, You want me to go over the edge and consequently pick up the pace, but I can’t follow so fast. Also I‘d rather stay a bit longer at the edge. Bask in Your presence. Remember: staying down is the ultimate pleasure . I don’t want to leave. I want to be there with You. Prolong my experience of Your power, dive deeper in my adoration of You. - There are different Neurotransmitters involved, and imho Dopamine is the more potent one: it makes me „want more“. I always want more. - Then there is Oxytocin: the bonding molecule: I want the bond to be stronger: You may think, that this wasn’t advertised as GFE, but I would still love to see that exploited in the same file: let me look into hour eyes, while you tell me how cute I am; pet my head; something like that. - Then there are the Endorphins from coming: They signal „I have enough. That was good. I don’t need anymore.“ - These are distinct signals, and each need their time: don’t rush. A good length for a hypnotic audio is 25-40 minutes. If it is too long, I have problems staying down. But if it is too short, and I feel rushed through the motions, I end up writing comments like this. - Please: maintain my trance: do multiple inductions, remind me to go deeper while I am already under: it helps me stay under. - When I am under: let me stay in your presence, don’t whip me through the hoops so fast. Give repetition. Give time to react. Give time to „want more“. Only after being at the edge for extended periods of time I finally earned the „Enough. That was good. I‘m utterly done / spent / exhausted.“-feeling. - And if you decide to include that „bonding“ / Oxytocin feel: don’t just tag it on at the end: Mix it in with the Dopamine „I can never get enough.“ - Once I‘m spent, I‘m spent: that has to be the end. Except for the Giggles this time I guess. Throwing in / reactivating those triggers of „Actually, You DO still want more.“ even after I am technically out of trance there at the end was a funny and an interesting curveball. But that does not invalidate all my extended wishes I had when I was down. P.S.: don’t take my comments too harsh. I love what you do, because your voice and attitude simply works for me, and I always look forward to new / more hypnosis audios. - I‘m just not a friend of too elaborate stories: keep it simple, take your time, repeat more than an awake person would repeat. Play on those main Neurotransmitters / feelings I described. - All those adventure and exploration and novelty aspects of creative writing are not that important, at least for me. - I just want to be down, want to meet you while I am down, experience quite a lot of „more, more, more“, a medium amount of „this is it, I don’t want to ever leave you“, and only finally a little „This is enough. Thank You.“-moment.

Hartmut Koerner


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