A Very Confused Pokemon Adventure - Chapter 5!
Added 2024-10-17 16:08:38 +0000 UTCComments
…Ah. “Knew” I should have left the (?) in my comment last night…thanks for telling me.
The Foreign Traveler
2024-11-03 22:19:07 +0000 UTCHmm, no corrections then :-p. The repetition is intentional. She had to build the tools, in order to build better tools, in order to build the tools she actually needed. The way I wrote it is a fairly common way of expressing that conundrum, when referring to uplift or time travel situations. Someone needs to 'build the tools, to build the tools that are needed.'
Novus Peregrine
2024-11-03 22:17:40 +0000 UTCAt last! Number 6! A Very Confused Pokemon Adventure Chapter 5 Page 3 ...for 2B to build the tools, "to build the tools, to build the tools" to modify her YoRHa tactical visor... Correction: ...for 2B to build the tools to modify her YoRHa tactical visor... Wow, shortest one yet! You are on "fire" Novus! I was laughing at 2B's interactions with our good Professor and his granddaughter. I do genuinely hope that she'll be able to fully become human. I've played the game starring her and 9S and I really hope that one day she'll be able to understand and experience what it's like to be loved and be able to love in return. Not just that but also experience joy, triumph and so much more. Keep up your damn good work Novus. I'll keep reading and editing it all in the meantime. Night!
The Foreign Traveler
2024-11-03 11:49:05 +0000 UTCScream tail*
WhatAFungi
2024-10-18 04:33:33 +0000 UTCGreat mini chapter! I have zero complaints. I can’t wait to see other people’s reactions to 2B’s “common” sense. Also, speaking of jigglypuff. I just finished pokemon Scarlet for the first time. I just wanna say. “Screentail” is the dumbest/laziest name ever. I lot of the paradox Pokémon’s names physically hurt with their stupidness. Who let their kid come into work that day to name them all?
WhatAFungi
2024-10-18 04:33:04 +0000 UTCThat wasn't 'chapter' 1.5. It was release 1.5. I'd released only a teaser (the .5) prior to release 1.5. The 1.5 was a reference to the fact it was the teaser + a more solid chunk of content. Though I can see how it would now be confusing, at the time it mostly made sense. I think. Regardless, there were actually 4 chapters contained in the 1.5 release. So this one adds Chapter 5.
Novus Peregrine
2024-10-18 03:22:10 +0000 UTCI was confused at first too, but remember 1.5 had line breaks with numbers for other chapters in it so it was basically one through four As for this chapter, I found 2B giving a Gyarados a spanking hilariously amusing, and am very eager to see which other Pokemon she gets to start her journey with.
Orchamus
2024-10-18 03:09:45 +0000 UTCI’m somewhat confused… the last update you did was chapter 1.5
Matthew Robar
2024-10-18 02:38:35 +0000 UTC
