Okay! Time for an update, as promised! Hopefully the attached deckplan isn't too much of a spoiler ;-). I made sure the model wasn't marked, so I doubt many people (if anyone) will recognize the design off hand. For the record, FYI, the original deckplan is not my work. I believe the original came from Stock Ships, a sourcebook for Star Wars: The Roleplaying Game. I've gone in with photoshop to lightly modify it, reflecting changes to the ship since it's not fully stock. It isn't complete, and doesn't show the cargo deck at all, but I wanted to provide people that were sufficiently interested with some frame of reference for the ship's interior.
With that little detail out of the way, this update actually ended up being a fair bit bigger than I expected! Over 7,100 words instead of the 5,000 or so I had planned. I doubt anyone is going to complain about that, though! It also, as it happens, contains a second Lemon for this story. They may be less common in the future. But for now, Izuku and Aayla are all alone in highly charged circumstances, so another one was bound to happen fairly quickly. Most likely, they will happen less often once they start gathering more people around them. Or, at least, they may occur more 'off screen.'
For now, the new lemon (like the previous one) is marked with ---Lemon Starts Here--- and ---Lemon Ends Here--- for those that aren't interested in them. They are not super important to the story and can be skipped freely if they aren't your thing.
New story chapters are attached in PDF and Epub forms. I'll update the master file later! Right now, time for breakfast...
Novus Peregrine
2023-08-08 22:54:18 +0000 UTCAeden Emrys
2023-08-08 19:34:32 +0000 UTC