Announcement
Added 2021-11-30 12:24:47 +0000 UTCHey guys, it was pointed out to me that I don't really interact with you so I wanted some feedback about the current fic or any suggestions on how to continue (Please don't go with one of the really cliché HP fanfic stuff, like going to the goblins, becoming the heir of magic or something). I already have the next few chapters planned out and I wanted to know if you want me to add something. I am not guaranteeing that I'll put your suggestions in, some stuff won't align with where I want the story to go. I'll probably post something similar on other platforms in the next few days but you will have the priority in term of suggestions. Btw if you're dissatisfied with some things please let me know.
I am currently writing the next chapter and it should be uploaded sometime today.
Comments
Shirou Emiya annoys the crap out of me as well (more of a Rin fan) but still tje worls is great, looking forward to more with adding a bit of this and that background, especially more Flamels
Shadowsmage
2021-12-06 18:17:28 +0000 UTCtbh I hate Shirou Emiya with his hero of justice cringe, but I really like the premise of the nasuverse its also pretty self contained so the author can literally just ad a character he likes in the flashbacks and ignore the rest saying that Flamel took care of it or something.
2021-11-30 15:47:32 +0000 UTCJust keep going at your current pace author, It's amazing already.. you basically seamlessly merged both the HP universe and Marvel/MCU perfectly.. there's literally like a million different things you can write about within those two universes.. You could also maybe add some side story bits, about her being the Morrigan.. maybe her temporarily diving into different realities/timelines/dimensions or even planets, like going to the kree empire.. to punish those that mess with the natural order, as the herald, avatar and mistress of death.. mhmm that'll be interesting..
8ightbit
2021-11-30 15:29:25 +0000 UTCThat's ok, if you'd want to introduce it in the future you could always flash back to when she disappeared from hogwarts after the goblet of fire for the 4rt grail war, and since the nasuverse is pretty secretive the lack of prior interaction with the rest of the world can be easily explained.
2021-11-30 15:13:01 +0000 UTCI’m sorry but I won’t include any of the nasuverse in this fic. While I am somewhat familiar with it, my knowledge is far from being able to write something up involving it. The amount of plot holes would be immense. So yeah, no Gilgamesh or Angra Mainyu. I like to take some inspiration from it but I can’t do more. Trust me, I tried to find some sort of summary or anything but it’s too much and honestly, very confusing. About the Loki thing, the Avengers movie is still a while away and tbh, I don’t want it to turn into a crack fic. Doing something like this will have a big impact on how other perceive the MC. I am planning to have her troll Dumbledore or Charlie Potter in flashback but I don’t think it’s a good idea to do it in such a meaningful scene. It will be her introduction to the events of the MCU and doing something like that would be entertaining for a chapter but is gonna mess up the rest of the arc.
athass_prkr
2021-11-30 14:31:28 +0000 UTCshe also was between 1508 to 2058 year old when Gilgamesh was ruled, the so called "first hero" so its possible they knew each other and he would just nope out of there when he sees her
2021-11-30 13:05:15 +0000 UTCI feel like jasmine would troll other people doing things like kidnaping Loki from the helicarrier for example. also how much of tipe-moon is in this universe because I think that the whole "Angra Mainyu" thing would cause her to intervene in the fourth holy grail war, on the side she could mess with Artur if the wars happening.
2021-11-30 12:59:29 +0000 UTCI think of the flashbacks as detailed explanations of past events. What I mean is basically a sentence or a phrase of something she has done in the past like years it's like year so-and-so Jasmine as Helga Huff of helped in the creation of hogwarts like a time table
Asriels
2021-11-30 12:58:25 +0000 UTCThat’s what the flashbacks are for. There are a lot of storylines I want to do, mythology I want to explore. I have planned an Ancient Greece arc and an ancient Egypt arc. I plan to do some one shots for short stories or ones I don’t think are worth more that two chapters. You can suggest some stories and if I find them interesting I’ll dedicate a chapter to them.
athass_prkr
2021-11-30 12:53:12 +0000 UTCCan we get summarized on what she did from her time In Atlantis to returning back to the present times?
Asriels
2021-11-30 12:48:13 +0000 UTC