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Helluva Trio 2 pg 84 draft (script)

P1: ..and slaps Millie hard across the ass. Millie screams.

MILLIE: AAAHHH!

P2: Millie snaps back at Loona.

MILLIE: That hurt! What the hell?!

LOONA: Consider us even for making me cry.

P3: Millie is still grumbling as Loona grabs her face.

MILLIE: Still... don't do that again...

P4: Loona pulls her in for a kiss.

LOONA: I'm sorry, Mommy.

 Helluva Trio 2 pg 84 draft (script)

Comments

I prefer the "Sorry Millie". The role play is fine but it doesn't always fit the scene.

Pinhead

I see you decided to change 'Mommy' to 'Millie'. Personally, I really like the Mommy.

Blackpaw Bellic


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