Helluva Trio 2 pg 67 (commentary)
Added 2025-07-14 13:13:17 +0000 UTCSo, originally, my first draft had Loona getting a drink spilled on her and then rushing to the bathroom to get cleaned up. Millie joins her to help with the cleaning, and that's where the sexy shenanigans happened.
Upon reflection, I realized I had so many scenes happening in bathrooms. It was kind of an easy solution to how to do sexy scenes in public locations--just have them go to a room where they're guaranteed privacy. But the setting was becoming redundant.
There was also the issue that Moxxie would've been left alone at the table, not contributing. I already had a scene where they took turns, I want to have scenes where it's all three together.
So I scrapped that draft and rewrote it from scratch.
Comments
Made the right call wanting to keep them all together in the same scene. Feels much more intimate and sincere. Not to mention wanting there to be a lack of privacy but they'll take their chances anyways. Also this page is GOOOOD in color.
Silver
2025-07-14 13:17:29 +0000 UTC
