Circus Freaks pg 16 inks (commentary)
Added 2025-05-13 15:20:35 +0000 UTCSo this is where I had to jump in and try to give the characters a little more depth than what the show offers.
Sure, not every character needs to have some sort of tragic backstory for you to like them, especially if they're a villain character. But I personally wanted more substance for these characters specifically for an erotic story because I personally don't find these situations titillating unless I care about the characters in it. Otherwise, it's just random acts of sex. Like in Helluva Trio, I wanted to try to get the reader engaged on how these characters' relationships are going to expand over time.
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The additional story and character development is greatly appreciated. Too many stories are just adult content and nothing not much else. What sets your stories apart from the smut farm is the effort you put into a complete story and not just sexy images
Pinhead
2025-05-13 23:15:35 +0000 UTCAnd it worked, I often found myself going crazy while reading new pages (especially the so-called cliffhanger moments). By the way, when it comes to villains and heroes, it's sometimes hard to tell the difference in this show. To explain it, I'll give an example - Hunger Games and its professional tributes. When you pay attention to their motivations, the way they spent childhood prepare for combat situations in the arena, and their victims. These less-prepared tributes reminds me I.M.P.'s subjects of contract killing, swap black comedy with a thriller and you'll find that it's the same thing. Anyway, regarding Striker and the girl in the photo... I remembered a folk song that would fit for striker if he were now with the twins in the evening somewhere by a campfire playing a guitar. (English version doen't exist, so I'll try translate it into understandable lyrics) I look into the darkness of one of your eyelashes on my palm. I'm playing songs about you that I wrote to you. It's almost midnight and the church bell remind me that it's night. I'm going to wash myself and turn off the lights, so what happens next? I put a few letters under my pillow that you sent. You write that you love me and that stress is bothering you. It's almost midnight and the church bell remind me that it's night. I'm going to wash myself and turn off the lights, so what happens next? REF: I wanted to tell you that morning, when I last had breakfast with you, that I won't call you again. For one stupid girl, for a few nights of desire, I betrayed everithing you dream of at home. Now I am sorry. How many times can a person love so truly out of love? Twice or three times - oh no, even once is enough. It's almost midnight and the church bell remind me that it's night. I'm going to wash myself and turn off the lights, so what happens next? REF: Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=agw2NOWDyvo
Sandos
2025-05-13 18:32:34 +0000 UTC
