Circus Freaks pg 5 draft (script)
Added 2025-03-20 13:02:33 +0000 UTCP1: A shot of Glitz and Glam's circus tent, advertised by Mammon.
STRIKER (thoughts): They oughta call themselves the Freak Sisters, with all those tricks and dance moves they've got.
P2: Inside the circus, Striker approaches the stage alongside Bombshell.
STRIKER (thoughts): The broads sent me a damn whole telephone book of maneuvers to train Bombshell and only gave me a week to do it. Ah nearly threw it back in their faces
P3: A shot of the sisters in an elaborate dance move, impossible for normal people. And highly seductive.
STRIKER (thoughts): But after seeing the pretty nonsense they could do, I'll admit, ah took it as a challenge. Fine. Ah ain't no slouch.
P4: Striker approaches them.
STRIKER: Howdy, ladies. No need for pleasantries, let's get this rehearsal started.
P5: The sisters get excited, practically gushing.
GLITZ: Ahhh! He came!
GLAM: He's here! He's really here!
Comments
Small typo spot: the horse is Bombproof
Enoran
2025-03-21 03:13:28 +0000 UTCOh, good catch. I have it fixed for the colored version. Thank you.
Swain
2025-03-20 13:45:45 +0000 UTCTiny nitpick: forgot a space between "to" and "train"
Just a Jinx
2025-03-20 13:05:40 +0000 UTC
