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Helluva Trio 2 pg 47 inks (commentary)

She's definitely not holding back now. Moxxie's trying to be responsible here but it's hard not to get swept up when someone you like wants you THIS BAD. Plus, hearing that his wife is okay with it probably helps.

 Helluva Trio 2 pg 47 inks (commentary)

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I felt it was confusing the reading order. It was hard to tell if you were to read his speech bubble first or Loona's. Plus, I couldn't figure out a good placement for it without going over Loona. Overall, it didn't feel necessary, so I removed it.

Swain

Where did the "I've never done that" go? Was it unnecessary? Outside a bedroom it's true (and inside it doesn't count, does it?).

Sandos


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