Helluva Trio 2 pg 47 inks (commentary)
Added 2025-01-22 14:25:32 +0000 UTCShe's definitely not holding back now. Moxxie's trying to be responsible here but it's hard not to get swept up when someone you like wants you THIS BAD. Plus, hearing that his wife is okay with it probably helps.
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I felt it was confusing the reading order. It was hard to tell if you were to read his speech bubble first or Loona's. Plus, I couldn't figure out a good placement for it without going over Loona. Overall, it didn't feel necessary, so I removed it.
Swain
2025-01-22 15:07:44 +0000 UTCWhere did the "I've never done that" go? Was it unnecessary? Outside a bedroom it's true (and inside it doesn't count, does it?).
Sandos
2025-01-22 14:59:31 +0000 UTC
