Helluva Trio 2 pg 14 (commentary)
Added 2024-09-23 15:43:10 +0000 UTCThe purpose of this moment is to slowly set up Loona's lack of self-control. She's at work, she's striking out with the couple she wants to hit it off with, but she tends to get lost in lust. It'll help explain some of her actions later on in the story.
...also the fact that there's been a number of non-NSFW pages and I worried that readers would loose interest if we didn't have some porn sprinkled in as the story progressed.
Comments
You’ve made a very engaging script so far from what I’ve seen don’t sell yourself short this is a very good read.
Icarus
2024-09-23 15:45:43 +0000 UTC
