Helluva Trio pg 51 (script)
Added 2024-03-02 00:43:00 +0000 UTCI purposely made Millie look pretty crazy, but did I go overboard? Do I need to tone it down?
PG51
P1: Loona succumbs, begging with Millie. She's looking up at the camera, desperate.
LOONA: Please! I want to suck on your husband's cock so bad! I want to hold it and feel it in my mouth and lick it and taste it! Please!
P2: Millie blushes furiously as she smugly grins really intensely.
LOONA: Let me just fucking do it already!
P3: Millie pats Loona's head.
MILLIE: That was very good, dear. I'll let you...
Comments
Hell no Millie making loona check her tone and dominating her is perfect
TheUnknown
2024-03-02 14:23:08 +0000 UTCOverboard? Maybe there is a little too much begging going on. But it's also in character for the storyline so its fine. Great work :)
Pinhead
2024-03-02 02:11:31 +0000 UTCI don’t think it’s overboard, it could be considered her being surprisingly turned on hearing Loona beg for her husbands cock. She’s definitely the top in the relationship
Keller
2024-03-02 01:57:22 +0000 UTCoverboard? hell no. Millie's expressions are the most crazy untamed ones in the entire show, you can never make her expressions too crazy
Sid
2024-03-02 01:03:58 +0000 UTC
