comic test poll
Added 2025-02-19 15:43:37 +0000 UTCso I have been wondering about this for a long time, and finally decided to try it out. I do feel like comics might add some spice to animations, even if the comic is a bit brain dead/ pornified, and short.
I will let you guys decide though haha!
If the majority of people want comics, I will do a poll after animation polls/ pairings have been voted for, where I allow people to vote for potentially the mood of the poll
ex: if its an alexstrasza anim x an ogre, people can vote on wether shes extremly into the ogre / in love, or if she is disgusted, but intrigued by him etc
here is the first test comic -
https://liardart.com/a-well-kept-secret/ (its missing 2-3 pages)
take into account that when voting, I know the theme of the comic is not for everyone, so ignore the theme/pairing, and instead try to vote considering future comics that have pairings you like.
for context regarding (pornified / kinky)
I mean, the pairing is kinky, but this question is more so regarding the characters thought process, and dialogues.
Should sylvanas as an example, be less ''ah frick my pussy'' and '' big cock plx''
and just overall less dirty talk.
last but not least. I would love to get some feedback. that can be done in the comment field below, or just message me privately on patreon.
Comments
I really like this sample comic! As long as it's not an excess amount of effort, and as long as it remains fun, I'd absolutely love to see more of the same :)
RS
2025-02-20 15:58:13 +0000 UTCIt's an excellent scenario introduction medium! Was not cringe- brilliant idea!
Dan Halen
2025-02-20 06:05:59 +0000 UTCyeeahh.. when looking up comics for inspiration, there was a lot of inner dialogues, and like you mentioned, they do all feel kinda cringe. I tried to tone it down a lot, but at the same time keep some of it, as I imagine most comics have them because theyre at least a bit well received.
Liard
2025-02-19 18:56:45 +0000 UTCI’m of the mindset that “don't explain stuff, show it”, or “less talk, more action”. If you can make a short, introductory comic, for the animation, of how the characters got in that situation, it's a really nice touch, and adds a bit of backstory. Just like the Silvanas exemple you added. The thing that kills it for me is including “dirty talk” or interior monologue like: “damn, i’m soaking wet down there, I can’t wait to feel that big cock inside me”. That shit is an absolute cringe fest and needs to stop. I don't need to read such things, but you can show it, with some quick panels, that the character is “in heat” and wants to go down, without adding text. Sure, a few lines of dialog, or a “narrator” setting up the scene is fine, but please don't go too deep in it, because nobody watches a porno for the plot and describing how horny the character is or writing some mind numbing and forced conversations between characters is a waste of time, time better used for animation :D
Metall Andrei
2025-02-19 17:49:12 +0000 UTCPersonally, any comic that matches the energy of "thegworks" stuff would be awesome.
ltmueac
2025-02-19 16:55:00 +0000 UTCI think it adds something to it, like what I feel mostly missing. You can see how it leads to the scenario like foreplay xd and depends too. To an ending to it, instead of repeating animation xD Idk how to explain else so no offense pls :D
Reloge
2025-02-19 16:36:33 +0000 UTCI love it. It definitely expands the horizon to the scenario than just straight dropping an animation with X amount of characters.
Arahin
2025-02-19 16:17:08 +0000 UTC
