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Vitaly S Alexius
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Stupid Sexy Cryptids [169-172]

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I am back took a hiatus to let the stories get ahead thanks for the chapters.

Beleruk

quit bandcamp due to their insane changes in terms of service and shift from paypal to stripe only music's temporarily backed up on telegram: https://t.me/+4xzgouWoVLg2NWIx going to make a website for all the books with the songs n stuff properly integrated in

Vitaly S Alexius

Can't find some music from beware of kittens

blue

Whare

blue

Yep

Vitaly S Alexius

SO I have a question. Is Arx the place where infinite isikai happens?

Joseph Elenbaas

fixed everything except for silly Sage speak, thanks

Vitaly S Alexius

"One hundred trillion beautiful pines drinking the poison from the water, scrubbing the filth from the air. The humans will perish and awaken happy and purposeful." This is almost the plot of Nausicaa of the Valley of the Wind. Also, none of these mentally unstable criminals are ecologists, as a global monoculture of Pseudotsuga menziesii/Douglas fir is not much better than a dead planet... >Laika was the dam keeper, filtering poison from gold Fun fact, in the 1600s silver was filtered with mercury. Good for the lords, bad for the peasants. Grammar: 169: The Sleigh's chimed softly -> add missing noun 170: Neatheweave Fold responds to pure desire. -> Netherweave Fold Somewhere… berrrrry inconvenient -> verrrrry inconvenient (or she's speaking in anime English) Human souls couldn’t really free -> be freed Very useful indeed. Okkay. -> Okay (or this is a Sage moment) 171: This isn't grammar but: >Noira stood at the gate staging area at the rear of the bridge. >a violent lateral translation that sent everything and everyone on the bridge sliding toward starboard. >Noira screamed, igniting from the entropy wave, falling forward towards her own gate. If the gate is aft of the bridge, why did falling starboard cause her to fall in?

Jorji Costava

Only doomed Earths, they don't have FTL drives for galactic dominance

Vitaly S Alexius

One thing I'm wondering right now is whether all these invaders, our favorite princess's family, the Christmas demons, the people from their home planet, and all the other fleets. Have they conquered other worlds besides just different versions of Earth from other dimensions? I mean, like in most sci-fi stories, have they also conquered other star systems or maybe even a large part of the galaxy in which the worlds they have colonized and/or conquered are located?

lukas0797

“You’re not thinking with portals!” Laika smiled. Cool, a Portal reference! Nice.

Austin Stanger

"Both. And, uhm… I don't just like Ash. I think that all of you are all really nice… a nice pack. " I think Laika means to say "I don't like just Ash." The way you wrote it, It's like she's saying she loves Ash. Ex: "I don't just like Ash. I love him." Switching the words changes it to "I don't like just Ash. I like all of you." She could also say "It's not just Ash I like", which makes more sense to me. Starting with a negative feels a bit awkward, but you be da author and you choose what you want to do.

Chythar

Yep, with all the shiny shady illustrations that royal road won't let me post. Probably going to do a Kickstarter for it later, drawing many arts for it with Lena and mabi now

Vitaly S Alexius

Quick question. Will you ever do physical print copies if this series? Because I NEED THIS ON MY SHELF

Bugatoli

yass

Vitaly S Alexius

Laika is going to be fed many incredibly shaped macaroni.

DecoySheep


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