Irwin's Journey 533: Mindless training?
Added 2026-02-21 18:26:43 +0000 UTCComments
Yay ?
Choronach
2026-02-22 11:20:18 +0000 UTCYay, I woul like one or two chapters about the training. Also I would not want to skip how he creates his new cards, how luath grows and the teachings of the titan sliver!
Miguel Urias
2026-02-22 08:02:03 +0000 UTCI'm probably too late but I def would be alright with a chapter purely from Irwindale perspective! Also I haven't finished the chapter yet but I'm personally always happy with longer chapters so I'm not complaining! Good work as usual!
X
2026-02-22 07:24:48 +0000 UTC1 or 2 chapters is ok and probably needed so we have an understanding
Moses
2026-02-22 05:57:00 +0000 UTCAlso. "drag ones" -> "drag once" whilst Irwin is travelling.
KARNLL
2026-02-22 03:13:32 +0000 UTCYay. The understanding of the mechanics behind the power system and history are a big draw for me, do learning directly how the Amnaithair analyses and guides, as well as their reactions to the techniques and any foundational gaps they feel he needs to cover would help build a better picture of his time. I'm hoping the runes come up again and Irwin actually figures out how to use or teach them, since they might be able to cover some of his weaknesses when using a single body, especially since he may have to station his bodies at different locations during the war to act as a defence.
KARNLL
2026-02-22 03:11:55 +0000 UTCYay! I always enjoy forging and training in this story - you knock it out of the park:-) Also, thanks for another great chapter!
Stephen Pearson
2026-02-22 03:03:49 +0000 UTCI suppose things depend on how the next hundred or so chapters of the story pan out. Much like how during Christmas time you did those extra chapters to pad the story while on vacation, Irwin’s training time falls in a similar category of filler. Thus, most people don’t want an extended time away unless the material is an arc all its own…yet the last time it happened on Scour was not to far in the past for us. In my opinion, I would focus on other perspectives like Luath, Greldo, Daubutim, the kids and Scintilla, maybe how things fare on Granvox or Dimarintsia? I think it’s called, probably Terlo in the other branch, preferably a mystery chapter with Gelwin’s clone, a few introspective Guidar chapters like the guy who chained the Shadin, and then…a dramatic return for Irwin to showcase the power and knowledge he just accumulated over the millennia as a prospective Titan. Then, the next time you take a vacation, pad the time away with Irwin on his own and learning the ropes. Seems like the best of both worlds: Luath time gives us bits of his guidance, the story itself continues to move and not get bogged down by a large exposition event, and Irwin’s return get an appropriately dramatic moment. Just my two cents…
Brian Woods
2026-02-22 01:58:00 +0000 UTCYay. Gimme gimme
WindGunner
2026-02-22 01:49:14 +0000 UTCYay, to more weird chaos titan whale
Cal
2026-02-22 01:46:48 +0000 UTCYay. One chapter.
Lrodee
2026-02-22 00:58:40 +0000 UTC