Hell Hound Evolution 89
Added 2026-02-04 15:52:07 +0000 UTCComments
Thanks for the chapter! One small note: You might want to change "'But if it bought me strength, then I’d only want that strength so fewer people have to die.'” into more active language like "'But if it bought me strength, then I'd put that strength to use to prevent more people from dying.'" Although passive language seems like it'd be a part of Jessica's natural cadence as well so it's up to you.
robotickz
2026-02-04 17:09:34 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. Look forward to the intersection of their paths, even if it'll probably take a while.
Jonathan Willis
2026-02-04 16:18:34 +0000 UTC
