Alice 139
Added 2024-08-10 17:00:02 +0000 UTCAlice's old friend Amber gives her a job as a model for Amber's fat-positive fashion company. After all, who better to represent the high end of the fat spectrum than Alice? But the two old friends each find some surprised on their reunion. Meanwhile, Jen eats too much and finds a new source of encouragement for her gluttony...
Comments
this is easily one of your best chapters ever! just perfectly written with 2 scenes each having such interesting and fun scenarios. Amber and Alice had a really intriguing dynamic, I like that you tease that maybe Amber will be concerned about alice's weight gain but instead she's impressed. having these characters meet again was really satisfying as a long time reader, and you really capitalized on that. I also loved the Jen segment. I like how silly and lighthearted Jen's scenes can be. Having her at the center of a very goofy but fun fetishy scenario worked so well! Edit: Oh and I also loved how subtly Alice is dressed as a pig by the fashion people, and Jen is dressed like a cow with her new outfit!
tyrgeo
2024-08-12 15:23:27 +0000 UTCAnother Alice instalment already? You spoil us! Have to say, I do really like how Amber has been re-incorporated here. I was kinda in the "Alice has outgrown Amber" camp of imagination, and not only is it satisfying to see it, but you've got such a great way of showing it. Amber enraptured by Alice's size, and completely blind to the actual struggles of obesity as she puts her own sensible limits on her gains under scrutiny, all while Alice doesn't even have a chance to say no. Alice's comment about needing a crane at graduation seems like it's almost destined to happen. Also had a bit of a laugh at Alice guestimating her weight at 570 pounds, almost as if she's in denial about likely being over 600 pounds. Would be a shame for Piggy Princess to offer Alice clothes based on an underestimate of her weight and simply have them explode off of her bulk!
miki
2024-08-11 15:23:51 +0000 UTCJen's brains are in her ass. ;D She's the dumb-dumb with the bum-bum.
kisbie
2024-08-10 20:28:02 +0000 UTCI really love the perspective Amber shines on to Alice. If this is how you enjoy being, maybe you don’t *need* to feel compelled to change back to how you used to be. Maybe this is who you are! And while I do admire Amber for being responsible about putting a limit, it’s clear Alice lit a fire between her legs for what she can do for her partner. She’s gonna *love* when Amber gives her the news tonight.
PrivateXimmy
2024-08-10 20:08:57 +0000 UTCYeah, she goes out of her way in her dream to try and prove she’s not ruled by her stomach. But then as soon as she woke up, all it took was a single stomach rumble to get her back to the kitchen. Maybe it really *is* the brains of the operation, haha. Really though, a feedee’s own body expressing a desire for its own expansion is a trope that’s always sorta fun to play with. As if it’s embraced what it was always meant to be: *bigger.*
PrivateXimmy
2024-08-10 20:02:54 +0000 UTCanyone else want jen to hookup with her boss? just me?
ghedorah
2024-08-10 18:14:55 +0000 UTCAlice and Jen both way into slob territory now. I loved Jen's internal dialogue. Reminiscent of Homer Simpson conversing with his own organs.
kisbie
2024-08-10 17:45:23 +0000 UTCA whole day of eating heavy grease and then *two* burritos in the evening? Jen's bedroom is gonna *stink*... Craig better be ready!
SlayerCake
2024-08-10 17:15:35 +0000 UTC
