Alice 138
Added 2024-07-22 17:00:01 +0000 UTCMaggie discovers that she can make some real money by keeping Alice fed... and overfed! This changes her perspective on her gorging co-worker quite a bit. Meanwhile, Tyler imagines what a future with Alice might look like and Jen works hard at her new job.
Comments
thanks! I'm glad you liked it :D
Molly Coddles
2024-08-07 22:55:07 +0000 UTCI've come to this very late sorry after a busy period of work and the like, but damn I really do think you've got a great update here. I love what you've done with Maggie here, and the way her interest in Alice's weight seems much more different to everyone else in the series. Sure, she's becoming a little bit obsessed with it too with her photos and images, but the way it differs from our other characters' interests makes for a really nice change of lens. I know this is also totally biased of me to say, but I do love how you've slipped the Tyler-Alice stuff in here too. Tyler's public downplaying and reassurance is such a great contrast with his own private fantasies and dreams of Alice's increasingly morbid, macabre, and, well, massive future is fascinating to balance. Also love Alice's mixture of denial and helplessness here too. "How could anything bad happen when she felt this good?" is such a hot line in this update.
miki
2024-08-07 14:33:10 +0000 UTCthank you so much, glad that it satisfies! :D
Molly Coddles
2024-08-01 05:31:14 +0000 UTCNothing better than ending a vacation with a new Alice chapter. You have such a wonderful way of writing force-feedings that I just can't get enough of and Maggie going all-in was a pleasant surprise. Not to mention the delicious irony of Maggie becoming Alice's number one feeder after years of trying keep her from eating everything. I can't wait to see where this goes. Will their symbiotic relationship flourish or will each girls' greed come to bite them in different ways? I guess I'll be ironically greedy and hope for both. All the best, Molly! Top notch stuff, as always!
Jorpando
2024-08-01 03:48:05 +0000 UTCmaggie can make more cash with live feed the more people pay the more she eats
blgmadresh0000
2024-07-25 22:32:54 +0000 UTCWill Laurie be featured in the next chapter? I miss the Queen Bee.
Achernarus
2024-07-25 18:27:55 +0000 UTCi wash myself with a rag on a stick!
ghedorah
2024-07-22 23:02:55 +0000 UTC
