Alice 113
Added 2022-06-09 00:00:03 +0000 UTCThings are really starting to heat up on stage as Nikki Lake gets tough with her guests. Laurie, Jen and Alice might not be prepared at all for what they're about to face! These three bloated besties are about to face the full brunt of Nikki's wrath! How disastrous is this taping going to get??
Feel like these last couple chapters might be getting a little... preachy? I apologize. I guess maybe these chapters are trying to deal with some issues that are important to me XP I hope that they're still entertaining!
Comments
What a twist! XD
Molly Coddles
2022-06-09 23:42:58 +0000 UTCCue the Monkey Ball announcer: **FALLOUT!** Damn I didn’t except things to go so poorly for our cast, for reasons almost completely independent of Nikki. I wonder where this will go!
PrivateXimmy
2022-06-09 22:03:59 +0000 UTCbig things happening! ;)
Molly Coddles
2022-06-09 17:40:45 +0000 UTCI thought we were getting near the end, but the big falling out usually closes the second act. :) You did cram pretty much all the plot into this one at the expense of 'sexiness'. Nothing wrong with that, but not entirely sure it should all have unravelled at once. Certainly was dramatic though. Intrigued to see how you recover their friendship from this low, especially Alice. This was a tough chapter for her. Oh yes, and Natalie McTaggert finally showed her face! It feels like this is partly a set-up for a McTaggert sequel/spin-off, where she decides to ditch the diet and just enjoy herself again.
kisbie
2022-06-09 15:28:14 +0000 UTC
