Alice 110
Added 2022-03-04 22:00:03 +0000 UTCThings start to get raunchy when the girls all hang out together in Laurie's hotel room. That's what happens when three horny fat girls have to spend the night without their boyfriends around... the conversation starts to get spicy!
The girls talk about sex in this chapter. I think I've said this before, but I feel like I'm pretty unusual among weight gain and stuffing writers because I actually like reading and writing about sex. I feel like one doesn't see that a lot in fetish stories, where the big draw is, of course, the fetish. Still, love to see my gals get some pleasure and there's something so... i dunno?... weirdly wholesome about watching them gossip about their sex lives which, contrary to all logic, makes it seem even MORE prurient. I dunno, I think it's hot. XP I'm not usually very interested in boys, but I do think sex with boys... can be very hot. A boy has a certain presence in the bedroom and I think it's very hot to see a man use that presence for good, if you know what I mean?
Comments
I kind of pulled the punches in this one, but only cuz I need Laurie in top physical condition for what's to come XD
Molly Coddles
2022-03-06 00:11:23 +0000 UTCOh yes! I really liked that essay 'Everyone is Beautiful and No one is Horny.' It's very true XD. Of course, it's fine if people prefer non-sexual fetish stuff for their erotic material, it's just that, for me, I like to get a little down and dirty sometimes in my writing XP
Molly Coddles
2022-03-06 00:10:20 +0000 UTCWait, you want to tell me that something with the word "Mini" in it should contain enough food to satisfy the Laurie Belmontes while the other two hotties get to clean out an all-you-can-eat? Laurie not abusing the room service as their personal servants is so unlike her. I hoped to see her create a bigger bill than hotel room trashing rock stars. Maybe even crushing a bed underneath her.
Arragon
2022-03-05 06:58:45 +0000 UTCA pretty damn good instalment once again, and a nice foray into some territory we don't usually see. One of the things I quite liked in this is just some of the ways you really painted a picture of their size in a way that still feels unique, a good example is that part where you mention Laurie being so fat you could hear it in her voice, or the sagging of Alice's bed, and her exploding PJs. I think you also raise a good point about explicit and sexual content in FA/WG fiction. Reminds me a bit almost of that phrase online that 'Everyone Is Beautiful and No One Is Horny'. It seems like so much of this content focuses on just visually perfect spectacles, but the degree to which it's sexual varies quite a bit. I myself usually fall into that branch, not really being 'Asexual', but somewhat 'nonsexual' if I had to use a word, however, I really like what you do with some of the erotic/sexual stuff in Alice. Laurie is the most central contender, given her relishing in her size, but Alice getting down a bit was certainly something that was nice to see. Wonder how Alice is going to act with Tyler now, and if any role-play and techniques Alice learned here might come into sight in future.
miki
2022-03-05 05:39:41 +0000 UTCJust wait til next chapter! ;)
Molly Coddles
2022-03-05 00:11:51 +0000 UTCWell Molly, I certainly don't mind you taking it from erotica into porn. :P For a moment, I thought the frustration and the booze were gonna get the better of Laurie and Jen and they would share a wild, wonderful, steamy, sweaty, bed-breaking fat-girl-on-fat-girl fuck!
kisbie
2022-03-05 00:08:50 +0000 UTCoops XP that's what happens when you only write when you're horny XP
Molly Coddles
2022-03-04 22:10:12 +0000 UTC"Bach home" instead of "Back home" in the first paragraph
Starqwet
2022-03-04 22:04:30 +0000 UTC
