Alice 64
Added 2018-04-09 04:17:56 +0000 UTCAlice and Jen return to Jen's home to enjoy some dinner (of course) after their successful scooter purchase. But when Jen excuses herself to break the good news to their friend Laurie, Jesse decides that she's had enough of these two blimps eating her out of house and home... and she wants to know what their deal is. She knows exactly how she's going to get Alice to tell her too: She's going to kill her with kindness!
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Thanks! :) Glad you enjoyed it!
Molly Coddles
2018-04-18 01:33:16 +0000 UTCThanks! Jesse's a little bit of an anamoly in this universe XD
Molly Coddles
2018-04-18 01:33:03 +0000 UTCThanks! :) I'm a little bad at spatial planning, so that's on me XP
Molly Coddles
2018-04-18 01:32:30 +0000 UTCThis was soooo gooood!
2018-04-17 17:49:48 +0000 UTCI loved Jesse in this chapter and her use of cunning, great to read about someone in this world that isn't a bubblehead. :)
Vader7476
2018-04-09 18:51:34 +0000 UTCI get the feeling SOMETHING inspired you for this one... lovely chapter! I must say, Jen wearing cowprint is very kinky. Perhaps Frank could get Laurie some cowprint lingerie as a gift? Nevertheless, Alice was very sexy this chapter. Some glorious descriptions as she's stuffed past her limits. I loved how you describe her looking like a mama bloated with quints as she stands, and how she just belches and passes out when she falls. The only part I'll critique is the stuck part at the end. I didn't clearly get at what point she became stuck, nor how Mrs Sarovy managed to feed her in that position. Nevertheless, I'm really looking forward to next time. Sleepy Stuffers tend to have most delightful dreams in the Sarovy household~
Phat94
2018-04-09 05:53:45 +0000 UTC
