Game: Alice's Heaven of Pancakes
Added 2017-09-01 04:41:37 +0000 UTCI finally had a chance to complete a new game! This is a Twine game based on one of my favorite branches in the writing.com Alice story, so I expanded it to add some good old fashioned stuffing...although this time, you get to choose how stuffed Alice gets!
Alice is a fat teenager who never seems to stop eating. But her mother has a plan to teach Alice a little lesson about what happens to girls who can't control their appetites. You can play the game at the following link or download it for play offline:
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/oh5bvai3xeyzyzy5s-mtng/alices-heaven-of-pancakes
Comments
a good idea!
Molly Coddles
2017-09-04 17:26:45 +0000 UTCI'd actually be very curious to see one for Laurie, myself.
Rhys Lawson
2017-09-04 07:25:12 +0000 UTCThank you! :)
Molly Coddles
2017-09-03 22:27:25 +0000 UTCYeah the ending was interesting since you can really only prolong the end at a certain point. I much more enjoyed the early parts where you could see different things happen. Not sure how you could move the story around more, and still come to the same conclusion though.
Mr. Monopoly
2017-09-03 21:09:12 +0000 UTCFantastic work
Daniel Willingham (PoundForPoundCake)
2017-09-03 17:45:02 +0000 UTCI've heard that the "clicking through" adds to the experience for some, but in the future I'll try some with more bracnhes. Thanks for the feedback!
Molly Coddles
2017-09-02 06:57:03 +0000 UTCYAY! Make her immobile~
Tory Williams
2017-09-02 06:56:47 +0000 UTCThanks! I'll get more fantasy sizes in the future.
Molly Coddles
2017-09-02 06:55:37 +0000 UTCIt needed more branching paths, it didnt even really need to be interactive since there was only one possible story/outcome. Needed more options imo
Roxanne
2017-09-01 23:17:54 +0000 UTCThis really was fantastic. Personally though I would have had her eat even more before the forced ending X3 Fantasy sized where she's too full to move ANYTHING~
Tory Williams
2017-09-01 16:59:06 +0000 UTCyay, glad you liked it! :)
Molly Coddles
2017-09-01 16:04:58 +0000 UTCMore of this please! This was great!
Vader7476
2017-09-01 12:35:46 +0000 UTC
