Avatar of the Seven Kingdoms Chapter 17 (The First Drop)
Added 2025-09-16 21:37:10 +0000 UTCComments
TftC and will jon go to Elemental Nations somehow like through The Black Gate or something that'll be awesome
Castiel001
2025-12-14 09:43:56 +0000 UTCI don't know how to feel. At first, I liked the story so much that I even paid to read more, but now, the fact that others can bend causes me conflict. Furthermore, the Night King gains more power, when he is already powerful enough. I don't like it, especially considering that Jon is extremely mediocre with his bending so far. Another thing is that Jon is behaving very submissively in terms of his power. I see him as very passive, and I see that you've used his personality from the series, not the books. Where he's more confident. Not a crybaby.
Kaleth_05
2025-10-19 06:00:22 +0000 UTCDefinitely not a fan of others bending. I’ll stop here. Good luck with this story
Darrow
2025-09-20 14:25:03 +0000 UTCFantastic chapter!
SiriusProblem55
2025-09-16 22:20:40 +0000 UTCI suppose it would have been too easy for Jon if no one else could bend, but I still don’t know how I feel about others being able to.
Mandragoran
2025-09-16 21:53:55 +0000 UTCOur Jonny boy isn't alone anymore! Yurrrrr!
Mr. YouthfulEntrepreneur
2025-09-16 21:53:40 +0000 UTC
