Avatar of the Seven Kingdoms Chapter 14 (A Mother's Touch)
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HOLY SHIT THIS IS AMAZING! I just finished binge reading this and I am so happy to have found this fic! Also I'm mildly annoyed that I didn't know about you till now when I read fanfic as much as I do. This is a crossover concept I never would have imagined but now absolutely adore! Everything makes sense in this, of course Jon can barely do anything and is learning slowly instead of throwing out fire blasts like other authors would have him doing, of course all the previous Avatars are just as lost as Jon and trying to figure this out as they go, of course there's conflict between them despite being kinda the same person, of course Jon first manifests bending while sword fighting, of course R'hllor can sense Jon's connection to fire and takes issue with it, and of course it affects Jon's connection to the other elements that R'hllor can't touch. All of it makes perfect sense, there's no plot armor or leaps of logic, it's all believable, something that is very rare in fics like this! My favorite thing though is that I have no idea where this story is going. Obviously, Jon will compete in the tourney, get together with Wyla, learn to control the 4 elements, and fight the white walker, but beyond that I'm clueless. Will Jon go back to Winterfell after the tourney? Maybe he'll stay in White Harbor as a foster or a squire to try and be a knight, Lord Manderly certainly likes him enough to offer. Maybe he'd even help on some merchant trips and travel to Essos (or Wyla could bug her grandfather until he agrees that they should go there on a little vacation). Or he could go south to Dorne, Oberyn and his daughters seem interested in him so it's certainly a possibility, and it would give him a chance to learn sandbending. Will he make a play for the Iron Throne as is his birthright, or completely ignore it deciding that he has enough trouble dealing with his bending, white walkers, and anything else? Will R'hllor stay a tentative enemy, or will he instead restore Jon's fire and help him with it since they seem to share a common enemy in the White Walkers? I have genuinely no idea and that is SO EXCITING! I can't wait to see where this goes next! Now if you'll excuse me I need to go read your Harry Potter fic. If it's anything like this then I am in for a very good time. Also final note, $6 for 6-7 chapters in advance? Now that's what I call good value! Thank you, good sir!
Dan Lemongton
2025-06-30 02:50:53 +0000 UTCIs Wylla going to be the Katara to Jon’s Aang? Also, will Jon have to explain to her what little he knows about his bending abilities? And will she decide to help him unravel the mysteries surrounding them? Also, should we consider the possibility that the Old Gods and the Spirits are related to each other? Or one and the same? Think about it! Both are in tune with nature and are seemingly infinite. Makes you think what could happen if Jon tried to enter the Spirit World under a weirwood tree. Hmmm?
Lionel Palivan
2025-06-27 21:57:10 +0000 UTCWhy would Lyanna be in the Avatar Spirit world? That means other spirits exist there and can interact with the avatars, which means they have access to Jon. There's a lot of narrative doors opening that are hard to close. God's taking Jon's powers, spirits existing in places that they shouldn't exist, especially if we're talking about spirits that should belong to other Gods.
Hakai
2025-06-27 05:23:26 +0000 UTCShit she knows !
Winter
2025-06-26 00:43:54 +0000 UTC
