The Growth of Amazons p351-360
Added 2023-11-15 17:08:10 +0000 UTCBeing that big and strong doesn't stop your heart from breaking..
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She will certainly rise like a very muscular phoenix from the ashes! I'm happy you're enjoying the story! Both Noah and Madison do make good points, and bad ones. Noah should not have taken such drastic measures right from the get go, but he needed time to think. Madison should not have responded so angry immediately shutting the door on any conversation. She might be muscular, but that doesn't mean she's a bigger person than she is in any other way.
Robolord
2023-11-19 08:00:14 +0000 UTCWow, I feel horrible for the both of them. Maddy was so excited about her transformation and now it's all coming crashing down around her, and she absolutely needs some emotional support. At the same time I can see where Noah is coming from. Maybe I'm reading into it too much, but in the span of a few days his life's turned upside down too, and the woman he loves has basically become a whole different person who dwarfs him in every imaginable way. To make matters worse it seems to him her personality is changing too, she's quicker to anger and use force, not to mention using him like a toy. He's scared of her and his fears are confirmed when she strikes him. Holding back or not, that's a major line to cross. I'm really rooting for them to work things out, but I don't know how you come back from something like that. I'm pretty sure Maddy will rise like a phoenix from the ashes, but it's also everything else around her that I find compelling...one of the things I enjoy most about your stories, Robolord
Bill Vu
2023-11-17 06:24:19 +0000 UTCThat's rough man. Well, I hope she bounces back soon.
Samuel E. N. Furlano
2023-11-16 03:01:02 +0000 UTC
