CYOA Part 5 - Six pages to go
Added 2024-07-24 13:00:16 +0000 UTCFinally getting to touch Alana! 🤗 We have only a few pages left to finish this little adventure, kind of a bittersweet feeling... And I learned that I get too carried always when there's no prior script for a comic lol
Enjoy these bits, and look forward to more soon!
Comments
Thank you!! I'm proud of how I handled the pacing with this one, while planning it I noticed it needed more anticipation 👀 I hope the last few pages look as good as these!
peachsmoochie
2024-08-05 01:00:21 +0000 UTCCarried away maybe, but that let you hit a delicious pace that has at least me anticipating along with Alana. Also you managed to really impart the strength of the hand impact of the spank and the lightness after, I really noticed that detail.
Anna B
2024-07-24 13:18:48 +0000 UTC
