Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Eighty Six
Added 2024-04-12 22:09:56 +0000 UTCHey guys, late today, but at least it's Friday! Thank you for the really positive feedback on the last chapter, it makes all the hard work and the aching fingers worthwhile. Glad you liked the battle and the magical creativity, because they are the toughest to write.
No battles in this one, but plenty of fallout from last chapter. Susan and the girls go on an adventure, but nothing is quite as it seems in this chapter. Hope you like it.
Will try to get some art out of this chapter's main star soon also!
Thanks for all the love - Rob.
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Glenn Elsberry
2024-08-05 13:43:15 +0000 UTCGreat chapter as usual. Neville mackin Lisa! Very smooth.lol Lord Longbottom is def coming into his on with the brief speech in the great hall and the chiding of Dumbledores decision to step down.
Darius Davis
2024-06-22 05:12:37 +0000 UTCDid you put Susan in Lara Croft outfit?!?!? HAGRID GOT RIZZ!! Oh next chapter is going to be interesting. Oh lord I think Tonks needs to get a restraining order against you, she is not having a good time in any chapter. I need Narcissa in fifties outfit on an image ASAP, that so hot... also Daphne. if Voldy gets metamorphic powers the world is doomed......... I wonder if the time line is protecting its self and is only allowing things that won't change it too much, I wonder what butterfly effects that will bring.
cookiemathew
2024-04-26 22:56:41 +0000 UTCGlad to see Susan finally join so to speak. I get the feeling her and Daphne will clash for top spot. One thing I thought of is Astoria. Does she know the her parents have her down as one of Harry wives when she turns 16?
red demon
2024-04-13 23:55:23 +0000 UTCIf Voldemort is genderbended, I might laugh my ass off for a whole day
Yavram
2024-04-13 22:59:26 +0000 UTCBeautiful. Thank you.
Poncj
2024-04-13 11:35:15 +0000 UTCI love that Tonks is unintentionally a walking category five disaster.
NightFury
2024-04-13 09:16:38 +0000 UTCYou know what, you might be right. I was thinking it was taken when Harry out of it; they would have had nearly a full day to steal it. But surely, he would notice? I mean, if you cut a dead person, they don't really bleed, since the body has gone cold and there is no heart pumping it, but Tonks wasn't dead so...someone probably wasn't paying attention, lolz. I hope he doesn't become a metamorph, but a metamorphic Voldy is a scary thing, for sure! But, on the other hand, Voldemort would probably come back weaker in comparison to having Harry's blood. But then again, Tonks' blood is probably better than taking a dead person's blood.
Kevin Thunder
2024-04-13 05:53:53 +0000 UTCWill the spell even work since Crabbe took Tonks’ blood? Who knows lol
TA3751
2024-04-13 02:09:12 +0000 UTCUhhh is Voldemort going to become a metamorphmagus? Because that's Tonks' blood right? I can't imagine many other powers that Voldemort could get that are more dangerous than that, especially since he's dead and could fool people easily. I do think it's funny and a little sad if Voldemort does get Tonks' powers just because she's actually trying to do good but still screwed up unknowingly
Kyrios
2024-04-13 01:28:06 +0000 UTC"He thought it looked a little pink." Foreshadowing? There is no way that the blood of a dead person would work as good as the blood of a living enemy. I foresee pain in their future, lol. Hmm. I wonder if Dumbledore pulled a fast one just in case and swapped out his father's bone dust. Are there other methods of resurrection? I honestly wasn't sure when I first started this chapter. It was definitely out there. I didn't like the village part and I thought you were jumping the shark a bit, but it got a lot better. Excited to Susan a part of the harem now and I am curious as to what effects she will have. It would be cool if she bonded him just as he did her, lolz. But probably not, since he said the words, but it would be pretty cool, and it would signify her status as both Lady Potter and head of the harem. I hope Harry does something special for her actual first-time because she is actually still a virgin, physically. My favorite was the aftermath and how everyone is dealing with the grief. It might feel a bit early to return to classes but it's understandable. They need to learn to defend themselves. Can't wait to see Harry's return becoming public! How will they explain that? Still a bit surprised that he stayed mostly dead, though, since in DH, it was only a few hours. People will think he's Jesus, haha. I hope Voldemort does return. With all the buildup, all the foreshadowing, all of the suspense, getting all of these girls, and all the talks about recruiting from Durmstrang and China, this cannot be the end for him. I keep expecting this epic war; not a skirmish on an island. I feel like this entire story, and everything that has happened so far, is just a prelude. forgot. Is Nagini still around? She wasn't a horcrux in the past. If even one horcrux was present at the time of Voldemort's "death," then he will inevitably return, it wouldn't matter if it was destroyed before he could regain a physical body.
Kevin Thunder
2024-04-12 23:51:07 +0000 UTC