Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Eighty Five
Added 2024-04-06 09:25:37 +0000 UTCHey guys, sorry for the late update again. It's perhaps the most complex chapter I've ever written and perhaps the largest at 14k. Maybe I should have split it, but I don't think you guys wanted another cliffhanger and that's not how I roll anyway.
A big battle that I hope you enjoy, with some turns along the way.
Thank you for the really positive feedback on last chapter, it means the world.
Hopefully you enjoy this one too.
Thanks for being the best readers - Rob.
Comments
Absolutely fantastic!!! Love when the professors pull up with Albus for the staff meeting lol About TIME we see Hogwarts professors truly being at the top of their freak8ng craft!!!! Snape absolutely deserved that exxxxxtra cool entrance. I about fxcking cried it was so smoove. Also, shoutout to Sprout!!!!!! But, no babbl8ng rune professor go8ng crazy? (honestly you might’ve put her in there but I stopped as soon as the assembly of the Faculty with Harry. Go8ng to finish now and apologies if Babbling pops up doing some cool extra powerful runes
Darius Davis
2024-06-22 03:23:59 +0000 UTCMan, this was incredible. Just got done with my second read. The duel between Harry and Voldemort was amazing. Harry was like a cross between Poseidon and Zeus!! Also, glad that Albus finally grew a pair, but that was reckless of him to put the students' lives at risk like that. He will face criticism for sure. I do feel that Harry could have avoided that Killing Curse. He just stood there in front of it. Voldemort was trapped but not him. But I do find Harry having a Jesus moment by coming back to life will be cool. People will either fear him or think he is a demigod. Luckily, he has Skeeter and the Quibbler on his side. Hopefully, the horcrux inside him is properly destroyed. I love this story, and I like Harry, but I do wish to see more Harry and less Tom. Interesting way of bringing Susan into the fold. Looking forward to how that conversation will go. I also wonder what will become of Tonks, now. I still think she destroyed her career, or at least seriously hampered it. Will she offer herself up to Harry? Ginny has also earned her a spot in his harem. Harry could use a muscle like her. He could still use some frontline fighters. But will she accept anything less than 'Lady Potter?' Where the hell is the ministry? Scrimgeour twiddling thumbs up his ass or what? Holy shit!! Flitwick, my man. You were such a badass!! So awesome. Almost everybody had great moments. Snape's potions lol. There is no way Longbottom could have done all that and got in there in time to save him from the already cast spell, but that was still a cool moment. Snape is outed now, but it isn't like he was an effective spy to begin with. Luckily for him, that Voldemort has been temporarily defeated; otherwise, he would certainly kill Snape through his Dark Mark. McG should have been able to handle Bella, but maybe she was already exhausted from her fight with GG. Honestly, I just live your fights. They are so creative. A fellow man of culture, I see. A fellow plantomacer! I got the Hogwarts Legacy reference, lol. Neville, the horticulturist!! Those Chinese Chomping Cabbages are OP. am glad that Harry took a different path in regards to the giant squid. I felt so sorry for it. Animal cruelty. The way both Harry and LV were controlling and transfiguring him for their own ends. But Harry redeemed himself at the end there when he helped set the squid free. I hope the squid recovers. Can he regenerate limbs? I hope so!! That "Staff Meeting" scene was great. Hogwarts Strong!! Pity the centaurs didn't join in but not surprising. Hopefully, next time the unicorns and other animals join too. I wonder what will occur next. I'm assuming GG will restore LV, unless past Harry can stop him. LV will definitely come back. We have here the Eye of the Storm. This is an opportunity for the good guys to make some moves. Let's hope that the Ministry doesn't pull a Fudge and declare LV dead. The next phase of this epic story is about to begin!!
Kevin Thunder
2024-04-09 16:08:46 +0000 UTCWow. Just...wow. Great chapter, Rob. Can't wait to see what happens next.
James
2024-04-09 03:30:56 +0000 UTCI wish we got more than one chapter a week these are brilliant
Aaron Kenney
2024-04-08 14:31:29 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. I loved the battle scenes. The development of your characters really shined during the battles.
NightFury
2024-04-07 21:40:19 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. This battle really allowed other characters to shine. I also love how you use magic in the fights. Most stories tend to just use magic as spam damage spell plus shield. You have people constantly using spells that isn't crazy, but when pair with another spell has devastating effects.
Dolan
2024-04-06 20:49:26 +0000 UTCWhoo weee gawd damn that was a rollercoaster! Fantastic chapter, you did an amazing job with the battle, totally capturing the frantic seconds-feel-like-hours-but-pass-in-moments vibe a good battle needs to have, but is hard to craft. Keep up the superb work!
Dennis Banfield
2024-04-06 16:47:38 +0000 UTCActually... what with the past Harry?
Poncj
2024-04-06 13:45:54 +0000 UTCWow...just wow. Brilliant work! I don't know what you have to go through to make a chapter like this one. But thank you! You nailed it. Whole chapter is banger! Hogwards is indeed strong. My favorite bit of this chapter is final scene between Voldie and Harry. Chef's kiss Looking forward to the next one! The aftermath of the battle. What happened to who? Who died/survived? The Grindelwald? And of course, what will happen to the one with cities size dick? Weeks became much quicker sinse I started to read your work. Thank you and take care of yourself.
Poncj
2024-04-06 13:25:05 +0000 UTCTHAT. BATTLE. SCENE. WAS. AWSOME
FredrikKyed
2024-04-06 10:43:05 +0000 UTCNo issues. Thanks for the chapter
bob lakhanpal
2024-04-06 09:46:20 +0000 UTCSorry, Bob! Meant to put up something last night but fell asleep, this chapter crushed me!
Robert Wilson
2024-04-06 09:44:20 +0000 UTCThanks. Was kinda worried when we had no word from you.
bob lakhanpal
2024-04-06 09:43:07 +0000 UTC
