Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Eighty Two
Added 2024-03-15 12:16:33 +0000 UTCHey guys, hope you had a good week.
I made a very slight change to the last chapter (81), so I've attached both chapters, old and new, in case you want to remind yourself of what happened.
If you don't want to read it all again:
(It's a minor thing - Harry confunds the King to return to his office instead of diving off the cart without a care. I thought I'd changed it already last week but my coffee-brain was all over the place)
Hope you like this chapter - there's a whole lot going on at a breakneck pace, including one of the most wild duels I've written in terms of imagery. I hope you like it.
An update on AO3: my work got hidden and they requested I remove some of the promotional chapter notes, I made some changes as requested (to the notes, not the story), but it still got removed, even though I made the changes in time. I messaged the AO3 team asking if it's completely gone or what the deal is, so we'll see.
Thanks for all the feedback and support! Hope to post some art of the lady in this chapter after the weekend.
Appreciate you - Rob.
Comments
Yeah that'd be better I'm just a reader can't write a coherent story
I am lord dems
2024-03-15 17:17:18 +0000 UTCEven then, advertising in the bio might not be allowed. A lot of authors have a linktree link in their bio that connects to Patreon.
Kevin Thunder
2024-03-15 17:15:45 +0000 UTCAwesome, I'm glad Alice finally got what they wanted. Frank was so very blind lol. It is a good thing that he's Secret-Keeper, he can come and go as he pleases. LOL to Lily finding out that her best friend has been nailing her son. LMAO to Alice wanting Harry to knock her up. That would be hilarious if Harry gave Nev a lil sis, but not needed. She's not wrong. Frank isn't worthy of a woman like that, even if he is a good guy. Their marriage was never going to work out. Alice was a doer, while Frank is the repressed, bland, quiet guy who stays at home with his mother. Harry might to come up with a good cover. Pass if off a family spell or something. Was Frank moving around like Alice was? I know that in OotP, Alice followed after Neville and gave him a wrapper. Maybe Frank was worse off. Perhaps Harry could lie and just say she was misdiagnosed, that maybe the DE's didn't have time to torture her all the way, and she was thus the victim of a Black Family spell that had no counter previously before Harry invented it. Because, otherwise, everyone the world over is going to be after Harry's miraculous healing powers. Considering Britain is being plunged headfirst into war with two Dark Lords, those requests are going to come fast. Speaking of Secret-Keepers, is Peter still the SK for the Potters? He did not become the SK until shortly before Halloween 1981, he betrayed them. If he was SK before that time, then the Potters would have been attacked sooner. What day and year is it for Past Harry? I can't remember. Lily was pregnant with him not too long ago. I know that Harry had to seduce Bellatrix, and that took time, but future Harry is still in 5th year. Are the two timelines and two Harrys not concurrent? Good duel!! It was fun and unique. Is Dumbledore still the master of the Elder Wand or does it have to be taken physically from his possession after defeat? Did anyone see Harry and Bella riding atop the dragon? I don't think they had disguises on. I can't wait to see everyone's reactions to Alice waking up!! I wonder how Augusta will react. She's used to being in charge of House Longbottom. Hopefully now Neville will get his own wand. I think he's still using his dad's wand in this story. I am assuming that the Veela Queen is the next woman. I'm also really looking forward to Tonks, Susan, and Tracey. Hmmm. Harry is having thoughts of reigning after he defeats the dark lords. He told Bella that they would rule Britain in the future. Metaphorically or is he planning his own conquest? Speaking of Bella, how on earth is he planning on clearing her name? Say he freed her from mind-control? Looking forward to the Alice artwork! Hope you can get your A03 account back up and running.
Kevin Thunder
2024-03-15 16:35:46 +0000 UTCThanks rob! Could you please post a consolidated story, chapters 1 to 82 together? Been some time since you did that.
bob lakhanpal
2024-03-15 13:46:29 +0000 UTCRemember don't advertise in your story advertise in your bio and suggest people check out your bio
I am lord dems
2024-03-15 12:36:46 +0000 UTC
