Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Eighty One
Added 2024-03-09 23:37:12 +0000 UTCHey guys, sorry this one is a day late. It was a really tough chapter to write - sometimes you know the destination but the journey doesn't quite work, so there were some puzzles to solve.
Plenty going on in this one, hope you enjoy it. There's not a new bond in this chapter, but there will be next chapter (if I can fit it within the chapter). Can you guess who it'll be?
P.S. Thanks for the heads up about my story on AO3 being gone. Edit: the story's been hidden by AO3's admin team, working on getting it unhidden. Fingers crossed!
Appreciate your patience and your support. - Rob
Comments
Yeah :D If nothing changes I can see down the line Harry fighting with Merlin himself. Who knew that bonding Merlins sister would lead to this? Like picture this. Fight is going hard for all of them. Despite having Bella at his side she is not ready to win(not fight) against Voldie/Dombie. They also can’t kill Dombie. So in heat of fight Harrys thoughts are: “Man, if only I had leverage on him”, “Did he had a sister that died?”, “If only I had her, he would give me the stone.”, “How can I get her? It sounds like going back in time”, “Wait a minute, I can!”
Poncj
2024-03-10 12:15:30 +0000 UTCYeah, for now on, Harry should let Hermione make the plans. Maybe Susan too once he adds her. Harry should have taken a more subtle approach but instead he went charging in lol. 😂
Kevin Thunder
2024-03-10 06:38:27 +0000 UTCFucking fuck, man! This is absolutely insane! God, I have no words to describe what I’m feeling right now! But it’s comes from a good place, I assure you. Rob, thank you! This one is perfect for my taste! Appoline and Narcissa are beautiful. Please give them the tension release they so crave with each other. I like this take on Perenelle. Please more! For a moment I thought that thing with Draco gone too far… but than you hit me with the Animism. Fucking hilarious. Bit with Carrow twins is intriguing. Especially when there more for Daphne to shine. Bella is so hot. Can’t wait to see when the future Harry meet her. And the ending. Harry just have an ugly face at this point. Making enemies faster then allies.
Poncj
2024-03-10 02:25:58 +0000 UTCDamn! Did Appoline give a 90-minute blowjob? You know, I actually think that Pansy might be somewhat right about the Carrows, even if the Carrow twins are themselves unaware. Something doesn't feel right. Maybe Harry didn't go deep enough with the legilimency. Harry is a fucking dumbass in this chapter lol. Tom is seriously rubbing off on him i the worst ways. That was his big plan? He couldn't be more subtle? He jumps off the track right in front of the Goblin King? He should have just broke in anonymously. Is the Stone even in there? I was under the impression that Vault 713 was drop-off point. A holdover until Dumbledore could grab it. Moving it to Hogwarts was always the plan. I don't think the Flamels actually keep it there permanently, assuming, of course, that it even is the real Stone. Could very well be a decoy. I still have my suspicions that they are still alive in the future. Vault 713 isn't even in the maximum-security wing of Gringotts. Gringotts goes significantly deeper, as seen in Deathly Hallows. The Lestrange vault has much tighter security. There actually is no dragon outside 713 in canon, unlike here, but I suppose that is in the future. Maybe the Stone is moved around constantly, and the dragon is placed there whenever the Vault is in active use. But I am pretty sure the carts in the Philospher Stone book stops directly in front of the Vault, meaning there is no room for a dragon, while the Lestrange Vault actually requires customers to walk a certain distance away from the track until they actually reach the vault. But anyway, that was in the books, sorry for nitpicking, its your story. Hmm, I guess the Stone might have been placed in lower security in canon in order to throw off pursuers. Voldemort was after the Stone. We don't know how long Quirrell was working for him. Honestly, why don't just place it under the Fidelius, I have no idea. I'm sure they are rich enough to have their own island. They could hide it there. I bet they did. I still think the bank stone is a fake. Really interested in how Harry talks bullshits his way out of this one lol. Very curious about what will happen. I'm glad Harry is nervous about fighting Dumbledore, although a fight between those two titans of magic within the confines of Gringotts is perhaps a terrible accident waiting to happen. Perhaps it would be best to simply reason with him. Unfortunately, he just fucked over his friendship with the Goblin King which will make him more hesitant to trust anybody. Awesome!! I caught the Dwarven reference!! Sweet! Haha, thanks for that. It would be great to see that angle explored more. I wonder what else they do? The goblins seem to have diplomatic relations with the dwarves even if the dwarves don't interact with wixen or play a part in the global society/economy. I bet they are amazing builders and craftsmen, and if they are anything like their LOTR counterpart, fearsome opponents on the battlefield. I hope we see what kind of magic they have at some point. Lol to Bella's joke about a dwarven chick. I wonder if dwarven women have beards like Gimli said? Damn!!! That was brutal!! Draco the manlet, now. I bet that was Harry's plan all a long. He definitely allowed him to "win" the contest, because this is, without a doubt, a worse punishment than death. I wonder how long Malfoy will be there? Harry said he would be back in six months or so. I wonder if that's just to revel in his victory over Malfoy or if he intends Malfoy's punishment to be temporary. In any case, I'm glad he survived. You can always bring a character back if needed or wanted but only if they aren't dead. I loved the interaction with Narcissa and Appoline. Those two are like oil and water. Feisty. Hmm, I am guessing that Harry either fails, and the Veela Queen is supplanted by her treacherous daughter, or Harry ultimately succeeds, and something happens during her whorecrux conversion. Maybe Veela have a bad reaction to it. You know what, Harry has Bella so there is need to make the Queen a whorecrux like I thought. He doesn't need to practice with her. Maybe he bonds her but his past self is killed, and it causes a backlash of sorts. Ditto for Bella's madness. Either way, I am curious about what Perenelle's reaction to her friend's coma will be. I have to say, that I was not expecting that. Arrogant Perenelle is a new one, but not surprising in hindsight, considering how old she is.
Kevin Thunder
2024-03-10 01:35:47 +0000 UTCI hope you can get your everything on A03 fixed. You had so many reviews, it would be a shame to lose em all.
Kevin Thunder
2024-03-10 00:20:59 +0000 UTCAmazing! I can’t even imagine how the fight is going to go down.
Brayden
2024-03-10 00:20:39 +0000 UTCHey, I just reuploaded with a (hopefully) fixed file. Give the post a refresh and the new download should work.
Robert Wilson
2024-03-09 23:58:16 +0000 UTCHi Michael - sorry, you have pointed that out before, I know. Let me take a look at fixing it now.
Robert Wilson
2024-03-09 23:55:26 +0000 UTCThe book title of the epub file still says chapter 74, epub readers add it to the library as Chapter 74, makes it hard to track whick is the new chapter. This has been an issue basically since chapter 74
Michael Suiter
2024-03-09 23:54:54 +0000 UTC
