Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Eighty
Added 2024-03-02 19:12:53 +0000 UTCYoung Apolline ^
Hey guys, hope you had a good week. Sorry that this chapter's a day delayed but I hope you enjoy it all the same. We have Tonks and Susan and Katie and a 1980 Apolline for you this week, with a whole bunch going on. Sometimes, mini-arcs take a moment to transition to, and this one has been a little while coming and finally arrives towards the end of this chapter. Should be good now it's here though, hopefully.
Thanks for your support, guys - it really inspires me to write these big 9k/10k chapters and make them as good as they can be.
Thank you - Rob.
Comments
Younger Appoline's body is perfect. The face needs more work. Her face looks like she's been living life of a druggie or drunkie....
Seaver IXp
2024-03-18 14:25:15 +0000 UTCJust read it again. LMAO, that Dumbledore/Tonks scene at the beginning still gets me. His poor blood-pressure! Damn, Appoline is a dirty girl. So, fucking sexy and freaky, lol. Seductive. I gotta admit that younger Appoline is even better than the older one. Haha, poor Narcissa. Younger Narcissa needs some serious TLC, as well as a good pounding. Lucius was a fool. That's hilarious that Rita Skeeter offers a "Gold Digger Deluxe." I hope we get a Bellatrix/Narcissa three-way. A Bella/Appoline scene would also be great. Might as well have some fun he's in the past. Does future Narcissa and Appoline remember Lord Foxham? Looking forward to Harry meeting Perenelle. I imagine she's the fighter of the Flamel duo. Very powerful with centuries of experience of knowledge. Are they secretly still alive in the future? I have always wondered if they were truly gone. Perhaps they just faked it to throw off Voldemort and other pursuers. Honestly, I bet she knows all kinds of stuff. Blood magic, rituals, esoteric magics, etc. Just don't your dick in the old crone, Harry! But I suppose that might be where it's heading. IDK, I guess if they truly are dead in the future, then it wouldn't matter if he bonds her. Just wish he'd bond Alice, already!! I have been doing some thinking. I have been wondering if Harry really aims to kill Draco. On the one hand, it would get him out of the way, quite easily allowing Harry to assume complete control through Helena. But on the hand, I am not sure if Harry has it in him to murder Draco in cold blood like that. We know from Narcissa that it is weighing on Harry's conscious. It could just be Harry messing with Malfoy or perhaps Harry would just change his mind at the end. He could just dump him in the Amazon. Killing him obviously removes a character you might wish to reintroduce later on. He is the one who kidnapped Helene and put her in that situation, but he kind of had a change of heart, even if he was a bit perverted about it. He didn't want his newfound sister dead, but he was a complete dumbass for believing Voldemort. Supposedly, he turned around in canon, so who knows, he might here if given the chance. But haha, no Astoria for him. Sorry Sucka. Aw. I love Marie, she's a sweetheart, for sure. A romantic at heart. I would like Harry to meet her family at some point. LMAO. The thought of Padma ass-munching her sister. Haha, shameless! Speaking of ass-munching. That's cool that Harry was able and willing to do that for Susan. Personally, I don't mind if that's that their secret thing. It would be something special between them and it is perfectly understandable that Susan would want something unique. She would think it romantic. You know, if rimming can be considered romantic. But I don't think Harry would want to!! LOL. IDK, I can see Harry possibly doing it to Hermione in the future but if she asks. Assuming this becomes a regular thing, of course. It truly is disgusting lol so Harry should clean the poop shoot magically, first. There's gotta be a charm for that, somewhere. Better safe than sorry!! I'm just glad there was some progress with Susan. She wants it bad. But yeah, it isn't surprising Harry doesn't know how to go down; the cheater had to use Parseltongue lol. Once he learns, he should surprise Hermione and Marie! YES!! Bring it on, Katie. Finally, she returns! Been missing her. She's one of my faves. Lol, yeah who would have thought that Hermione, of all people, would do that so blatantly in the Common Room. She really has broken bad. I have thought of some other ladies for Harry, but they would, essentially, be OCs. Fleur in the books, was said to have some Veela cousins. So, it's possible that Appoline may had a sister or two, and several nieces. Anyway, about Grindelwald. Harry can't just get him to turn on Voldy, it would make what happened far too obvious. A good way for Harry to subtly dispose of him without raising Voldemort's suspicions is to maybe implant a failsafe directly inside GG's core; an Achilles Heel, if you will. If Harry does it right, it could make GG falter at just the right time, thereby leaving him vulnerable, thus allowing Harry or Dumbledore to kill him. It would just like an old has-been made a mistake in a deadly duel. But he should maybe steal his knowledge first. I hope this fic continues for a good, long while. Do you have any solid plans as to how long it might go for? Do you plan on going through Harry's 7th Year or even beyond? It would be a shame if this was cut short. With all this talk of China, Veela, Voldemort being way smarter than canon, and Harry wanting to recruit girls from abroad, it looks like it's all shaping up for something epic.
Kevin Thunder
2024-03-06 07:47:24 +0000 UTCI personally don't know if Harry has it in him to murder Malfoy. Ruthlessly DE's in war, yes, but this is definitely different and more personal than that. I think it likely that Harry is just fucking with Malfoy. After all, we haven't had a Harry POV during these sex torture sessions; everything has been from Malfoy's POV.
Kevin Thunder
2024-03-06 07:34:42 +0000 UTCWould you consider letting Draco live? I really think that Draco’s own mother killing him might detract from the story more than it would add to it
TA3751
2024-03-03 18:53:31 +0000 UTC
