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Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Seventy Nine

Hey gang, hope you had a good week. This one's a straight continuation of last chapter, exploring what Harry and co. do with their newly gifted prisoner. 

Also up - goblins, twins and Tonks tries a new tactic. 

P.S. I saw your messages asking for some more Fleur/Veela court/France, coming up soon, not to worry.

Tracey art up next (actually, for real this time, I'm finally happy with it.) Let me know in the comments if you've got any more art requests.

Thank you guys, Rob. 

P.S. Next week's chapter may be delayed by a day/day and a half, posting late on Saturday 2nd March rather than Friday 1st March. Sorry! 

Comments

I gotta agree with Kevin Thunder having mythical beings more often in this story would be amazing especially when Harry thinks with his dick around the Fay, Veela won't be his biggest problem, maybe a Luna based introduction? My fannon for Dawfs in HP universe is way back in the old times Dwarves and Goblins fought for supremacy under the mountains of the world and as Goblins can much more freely use magic. The Dwarves have been pushed back far into the highly defensible but desolate parts of the globe like the urals and even further into Siberia and that's why they're so rare. No one wants to piss of the goblins helping the Dawfs and the Dawfs are too proud to ask for help.

cookiemathew

Hi Kevin, thanks for your message, always look forward to seeing your thoughts. It's odd that the books didn't do much with dwarves, isn't it, considering that JK pulled so many other fantasy staples/tropes. Perhaps she had plans that she axed. Or perhaps she thought, with goblins and house-elves, that she had enough small races/being.

Robert Wilson

Yes, hoping for more Marie, as well. Definitely a favorite of mine!

Kevin Thunder

They may know Occlumency enough to know when someone is poking around in their head.

Kevin Thunder

Behind on my review. WiFi was out and I can't do paragraphs on a cell phone. That's a Patreon design flaw. Tonks can't catch a break can she? LOL it is one thing after another. She's a running joke now haha. Can't wait to see how this turns out but, I only have to wait 2 more days now lol. She's gonna get some Romilda action. Didn't they teach her to be more careful in Auror Academy? Maybe Harry can save her and play the hero. I just hope that when she does eventually join, it isn't an automatic love connection. Harry has never bonded with a lady who outright despises him. Even Narcissa wanted it to some degree. So, her instantly being best friends and happy, etc. after one fuck wouldn't be very realistic, because nothing can really create real, true love. Speaking of Romilda, maybe Harry should fuck her. I know she is a fangirl, but she's a good-looking fangirl, and Harry needs more power. There are so many girls out there who would give anything to be a mistress or whatever. Considering Harry is up against both Voldemort and Grindelwald, perhaps it wouldn't be a bad thing to bond a few fangirls. Ginny could certainly prove useful, she is damn good with a wand, and she is pretty powerful, and as soon he bonds with her, he will know about the diary page, and according to the books, she does grow up to be pretty hot. I'm sure he could find some use for Romilda, as well. I also have suggestions for another girl. Penelope Clearwater. She could be the Black Family Researcher, or Harry could use her in another capacity; he does have a massive estate. Damn, that was cold. Narcissa has it out for her son now. I can't wait to see Draco's reaction to Marie and the Patil twins, they will surely blow his mind. Then there is Appoline who he knows nothing about yet. Lol to Daphne. She takes pride in herself! Looking forward to the Tracey artwork. Been waiting for this. I am hoping for some Pansy artwork soon. I love your description of her. Gothic Pansy is where it's at! Let's see those tats. I can see her being one of Harry's favorites. I hope to see more Luna! I'm assuming she will be the next long-term girl arc. First, we had Daphne and Fleur, then we had Sofia, which is still ongoing, and now we have Susan and Cho, and, to a lesser extent, Tonks. All of these gals have had starring roles in their own long-term miniature story arc that either sees, or will see, Harry seduce and acquire them, and each of them are of some importance. Considering that Luna is the daughter and heir of the owner of the only running British magical newspaper (is it also a magazine?), as well as a potential Medium and Seer, I would say that Luna is important. You have an awesome story. The only thing I say you need to work on is wards. So far, they have kind of been nonexistent in your fic. Plus, wouldn't the Galleons have magical protections to prevent them from being melted? There probably should be a mention of GG getting around that. This would no doubt piss off Gringotts. Do you have any plans to feature dwarves? We saw a few of them in Chamber of Secrets, but they seemed to be more along the lines of the Snow White dwarves. It would be cool to see some LotR inspired dwarves. I know this chapter states that the goblins are the only non-human race to play an active role in Wizarding society but it isn't too late to add them, and if they exist, I can see Harry and Grindelwald trying to get them. Hell, who knows, maybe the dwarves played a role in the cursed Galleons.

Kevin Thunder

We didn't see Marie this chapter. That was a pity. I laughed hard at the "bowling ball thing". I really liked how Tonks plan for Harry backfired.

red demon

eesh. Not even the idea of trying to look in their heads? This Harry really is thinking with his dick to much.

Darth_Chinran

Ginny has officially hit the crazy train. Harry, remember the Bro Code with Ron!!! Draco, stupid Draco, please die next chapter!!!! I need more with the past! That mention of Lily has me frothing at the mouth. Smart Mione is a hot Mione! Jealous Pansy! The twins are interesting but suspicious. Tonks, bitch you deserved that.

Victoria Almond

Great timing! I was about to message you that we have gotten spoilt from the last few times and are eagerly waiting for your next post, and your chapter arrived... Thank you

bob lakhanpal


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