Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Sixty Three
Added 2023-11-03 16:55:39 +0000 UTCHey guys. Thanks for the kind comments on the mystery arc, I'm glad you're enjoying reading it as much as I'm enjoying writing it.
Let's hope you enjoy the denouement. This chapter features Peeves, he of comic relief, one of many curious omissions from the film franchise. In fanfic, I usually find him more irritating than I do in the books - his personality is never quite right, his dialogue lacking the wit. I tried to portray him a little better, but who knows if I succeeded?
When the killer's mask is unveiled, will you be surprised and/or satisfied? Writing mystery is the hardest genre-arc I've tried, but I really enjoyed it. Hope to do it again sometime.
Some Fleur-Halloween art popping up in a few minutes to kickstart your weekend and hopefully more good things coming your way soon.
Thanks for your support, truly - when my eyes are heavy and my fingers are tired, you keep me going, wanting to make each chapter better than the last.
Cheers, Rob.
Comments
Damn, I hope Parvati will recover. But damn, she took the full dose. Katie was cursed through a microtear in her glove, and she spent half a year in St. Mungos. Maybe Harry can afford better, more expensive treatment to help her recover sooner? I loved the mystery and how Harry solved it. Lol. Filch the racist. Doesn't surprise. I love how Harry threw that line back out there. Dean's banter in this story makes me chuckle. I knew Hermione would want to fuck after that. Harry solving crimes is exactly what would turn her on. Still hoping she gets a ring, even if it's not as a "Lady." I wonder if any Ravenclaw ladies were turn on, too. Speaking of Ladies, when will Narcissa and Appoline give Daphne her punishment? I can't wait for their BDSM treatment!!! Oh, and btw, when will Tracey come back from her punishment? Yikes, Contessa Zabini sounds like she might be hot, being an Italian beauty, and all, but damn, Harry may want to stay from her. Unless Harry turns her into a whorecrux in the past. That would be cool if he was one of her past husbands, supposedly dead. But I'm not sure if she would be an asset or a liability, tbh. I wonder how she broke free from "Morgana's Blessing?"
Kevin Thunder
2023-11-03 22:58:54 +0000 UTCI forgot to say it last chapter, although I am fairly certain I did mention it in an earlier one, but Marcus Flint graduated in the same year as Percy, two years prior.
Kevin Thunder
2023-11-03 22:05:08 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Couple of points: 1.I can read your Harry/Hermione for eternity. *kissing your fingers* 2.Good for Geany. Mystery arc showed us her struggles. Looking forward to see more of her. 3.The suspect was a surprise for me, which is good. 4.Press F for Filch. True Hero as it’s seems. Also, it’s official - I’m simping for your Daphne. Thank you. PS. Any news on The Potter Patrol?
Poncj
2023-11-03 19:04:42 +0000 UTCLove it
Ralnn
2023-11-03 18:30:34 +0000 UTC
