Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Sixty
Added 2023-10-13 17:41:46 +0000 UTCHey guys, welcome to Chapter 60 and the weekend too. We're back on the Friday schedule and back with Harry after his new conquest last week.
This big chapter is a little more steamy than I'd like, especially after last week's blowout. However, the sauciness in this chapter was mostly needed to drive the plot. (Un)fortunately for Harry, everyone's trying to seduce him, but not all of them have got the best intentions.
There's a bunch of threads we're moving forward with here, from Tonks to Bellatrix, from Ginny to the Veela Court. Those Veela are up to no good - we'll see if Harry falls into the trap or dodges it. Meanwhile, Daphne's glorying in her victory - has she never heard that pride comes before a fall?
Some art coming soon - featuring not one but two of your favorite Malfoy ladies.
Thanks for being a supporter and all the comments and likes - it helps me going when I'm staring at a blank document and it makes me so inspired to make this story the best it can be.
Thanks, Rob.
Comments
Enjoying the series, keep up the great writing! Just a helpful suggestion for those playing catch-up with past chapters, a larger 10 chapter release or the story-to-date would save a lot of downloading and converting, not to mention a good backup for tech glitches like an empty pdf file on chapter 41!
Koa
2023-11-08 04:14:31 +0000 UTCpast scenes are incredible - I didn't think, fwiw, Harry had taken Daphne's quim yet, but it seems like he had (in ch59). But ultimately, he is distracted. It feels like there is a noose closing in around him
newps
2023-10-27 23:04:20 +0000 UTCLMAO, this chapter was unintentionally hilarious. Or was it intentional? Regardless, I had fun with it, particularly the Tonks scene. Dominatrix Narcissa, oh yes. Bring it. Narcissa, Appoline, oh my. Daphne will have tons of fun. I do have another suggestion of you are interested. I wonder how Daphne would react if Harry took her butt plug back? Damn. While I am not quite fond of the age change, or how little a time she was apparently a Death Eater (compared to a decade in canon), I absolutely love your portrayal of Bellatrix here. She is so sensual and so powerful, so fierce and independent. But deep down, as much as she denies it, she also craves submission, someone worthy to bend over for. She is a much better version of Daphne, if I'm honest. Both of these ladies come from powerful families but only one of them is a true woman and only one of them is truly powerful. Daphne fancies herself a princess, but Bellatrix acts like a queen. Bella is the Lady Black Harry didn't know he needed. I hope Harry can save her soul, but then again, he also needs to look out for his own soul, as well. Ha, if only he had gone back a little further, he could have made a little Delphini. Speaking of souls. Oh, Ginny, you are falling far. That stalker needs help. I hope no harm comes to Cho. I am thinking Tonks or Hermione will be the one to bust her. Speaking of. Operation: Tonks is now in effect, and Harry doesn't even know it. Tonks has had her first taste, and thus, begins the fall. I bet Hermione busts her ass lol. No way Hermione doesn't notice somebody rifling through her things. Once Harry tames her, Harry will know he has made Dumbledore quite weary. I hope Susan finds happiness. Her being heartbroken and alone makes my stomach twist. She doesn't deserve that. Shame on Ginny. I hope Harry can prove its innocence, but either way, I just hope Susan finds a home. I would be worried, but I already know that Sofia's evil plan will fail, because this is Harry Potter, we are talking about here. He can survive almost anything. But, no doubt past Harry and the Queen will play a role somehow. Probably a good thing he went back in time. I hope Harry conquers her. If there is one Veela that needs to be tamed, shamed, humbled, and humiliated, it is her. Come on, Harry, do it for all the lads out there. Do it for yourself. Some lovely Durmstrang girls sound nice. Natalia Pavlova set a high bar there in International Triwizard Tournament, but I am confident you can match her, if you want to go that route. Who knows, Harry might even find a powerful wife-to-be there at Durmstrang. Bound to be some powerful princess there from well-connected families. Fleur scenes were amazing, I loved it. Sounds like she's riding a high that she inevitably needs to come down from. Marie might help Harry tame her. Harry should give her a butt plug. I am hoping Luna gets her co-starring role soon. Lovegood is literally in her name. Harry needs that quirky 'Claw lol.
Kevin Thunder
2023-10-14 02:35:01 +0000 UTCNice very nice. A lot happened this chapter. It looks like the punishment Harry doles out to Daphne isn't working. Narcissa has a plan though. I'm looking forward to seeing that. Daphne isn't the only that needs some punishment. Fleur needs to be shown who's boss. I liked the scenes with Bella and Tonks. The description of Hermione's dorm makes me want to see some of Harry and Hermione's cosplay.
red demon
2023-10-14 01:11:49 +0000 UTCHaving Harry watch what Narcissa does to Daphne will drive the point home. If he brought Susan to watch the punishment ๐ฎโ๐จ๐ฎโ๐จ or some form of denial spellโฆ Really liked the Bella scene. It will be interesting to see how that shakes out. I wonder what Harry has in store for the Veela court. Not a fan of the Ginny and Tonks stuff currently. But youโre portraying the stalkerish Ginny that never got over what happened in her first year while actually showing a reason for that is a good twist. Not like Harry has much of a leg to stand on regarding dealing with having Tom in his mind ๐
Robert
2023-10-13 18:27:50 +0000 UTC
