Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Fifty Six
Added 2023-09-15 16:11:41 +0000 UTCHey guys. Woo, the chapter's here and now we're out into the wider world again, we can see what's going on with Voldie, Dumbles and Tonks too.
This was a tough one to write - there's just so many things to write, from Veela intrigue to 80s Alice seduction, so some of it has to wait. Worry not, for I haven't forgotten about a bit of it, not even Katie Bell. Hoping to get to Veelas/Alice very shortly. And even Fleur Delacour...
Thanks for your support, guys. You're the best. More artwork coming in the next couple of days, as always, and it's getting better and better.
Cheers, Rob.
P.S. I call this chapter Two Unexpected Pimps.
Comments
Also, I very much enjoyed the way the events of Harry invading the Malfoy residence, Lucius finding out about an unknown male visitor, and Voldemort showing up just on time to be overheard and then killed by Lucius, lined up.
uncertain
2023-10-15 01:45:18 +0000 UTCDaphne was originally introduced in chapter 3 as having "long dark hair in sleek waves and almost to her waist". However I noticed in this chapter (ch. 56) that she is referred to as a "blonde beauty", and then I noticed that all art posted of Daphne has her looking very blonde. It seems unlikely that all art would be corrected, so I assume she'll officially be blonde from now on.
uncertain
2023-10-15 00:56:36 +0000 UTCOh tonks you beautiful, sweet, thing. You’re on a seduction mission that’s doomed in more ways than one.
vb
2023-09-15 22:04:38 +0000 UTCOnto Harry, the mind shit fucking him up was expected. Helena, Apolline, and Cissa hopefully enjoyed it even if it was rough. As for the Hogwarts girls, Daphne is such a bitch. She earned that 100%. I want our Slytherin Princess to find out exactly what was included in the engagement deal. My love for sparkly shit is dying to see the ring as much as I want to see Daphne realize that her father tied darling Tori into this. Harry needs to get his mind better before he claims another girl. He doesn’t need to actually rape Padma or Parvati or Fleur or Susan. If he doesn’t chill, I see that future, particularly with how Tonks is involving herself of Ginny with the damn diary page. Also, I never thought I would say this, at least for this version, but Fuck Yes! Lucius did the best thing possible by killing the snake bastard. Damn if it didn’t stick, but good effort. Hopefully that will keep the evil freak from traveling in time again. As for the Carrows, that is going to backfire on Voldie so bad. Resisting Harry is not a female strong point in this story. He is handing him a second set of twins. Daphne is going to be pissed though if more Slytherin girls keep going after Harry. Pansy’s little moment a few chapters ago is already going to hint at problems down the line. As a Slytherin myself, no pure blood of our house is going to take kindly to being concubines or non-wife positions lightly and Daphne, as a wife, is going to have issues with this, particularly since the Potter spot is still open. You may seriously want to consider adding another house into the bloodline such as Peverell or Gryffindor even to open up more wife spots. As for Mei, I kind of saw the time traveling shit to come up with her. My only big question for that is if the owl in question is Hedwig or a relation to our Owl Queen.
Victoria Almond
2023-09-15 16:54:49 +0000 UTCOh where to start. Dumbledore needs to shut the fuck up. How is him whoring Tonks out to Harry any better to what Voldemort is doing with the Carrow girls? He says he’s doing it to help Harry but I would not trust the manipulative bastard any further than I can throw him. That “Greater Good” shit came from his past “friendship” with Grindelwald after all. I had a feeling that Tonks is going to join the harem, but not that she was going to get pimped out by Dumbledore. The second Harry finds out that she’s spying, he better kick her ass back to the goat so hard that she won’t be able to change to cover the marks. She is helping Dumbledore set Harry up for falling evil.
Victoria Almond
2023-09-15 16:37:08 +0000 UTC
