Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Forty Five
Added 2023-06-30 18:37:03 +0000 UTCHey guys. It's Friday again, and another chunky chapter for you. I'm trying to write more manageable lengths, 5-6k instead of 9-10k, but it's not easy as the story gets more complex.
This week, I learnt that Tracey's surname is Davis, not Davies. Just me? It's funny how canon warps in the mind over time, or one loses track of the little things.
Hope you enjoy the chapter - it's full of danger, destruction, Dumbledore and Daphne, though perhaps not in that order.
And the action scene too - action is so complex to write, especially when you're trying to write two protagonists of sorts, and their interaction.
Thanks for your support, guys, you're the best.
Comments
The plug should’ve wound up in Tracy’s mouth for that little romp
A
2023-07-12 20:07:23 +0000 UTCYes, I love the longer chapters! This was truly great. Good stuff! Damn, Tracey is vicious! Trying to murder a classmate like that, damn. Before, I was wanting her to join the harem but now I'm not sure she deserves to now unless its as a concubine. Oof, being a lab rat will be tough. I hope Harry has something extra special in mind for the little dragon. Probably a good thing Harry wont take Daphne's V-card right now. That will be a special moment that is best done without Tracey.
Kevin Thunder
2023-07-07 01:38:21 +0000 UTCHey man. This wasn't the sex scene, that comes next chapter. That was just the tease/a little build up, because I couldn't fit in the full scene, given that the chapter was already 10k. Will try to keep the balance right, sometimes it's misleading because it's a story plot scene delivered under the guise of sexiness!
Robert Wilson
2023-07-02 12:52:46 +0000 UTCI feel like the sex scenes are getting shorter and less…. descriptive?
2023-07-02 11:16:37 +0000 UTCPower corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolute. Harry waltz in darkness too much. I would love to see anti-villain Harry Potter.
Alper
2023-07-01 21:20:52 +0000 UTCTracey should become a pet of some sort & its time to end draco.
Theprof
2023-07-01 17:17:09 +0000 UTCJust assuming, he does it one of the next times he goes in the future. So the ‘current’ Harry doesn’t know, but when he eventually goes he tells her.
vb
2023-07-01 04:31:42 +0000 UTCI'm curious, how did Harry know to tell the young Cynthia (Greengrass) in the past to provide the Wiggenweld potion to her future daughter on this day? He seemed to have been caught completely off guard to have already set that plan in motion
Peps
2023-07-01 04:17:32 +0000 UTCHope harry/daphne scene picks up in the next chapter
Dante Sparda
2023-07-01 01:28:08 +0000 UTCInteresting decision. I would’ve thought Harry would have bonded Tracy to him and used her as an in against Draco. If Draco thought the plot ‘failed’ he might have tried again, and Tracy could have offed Draco or effectively neutered the plot. Now Harry can’t really move against Draco except legally since he told people Draco tried to kill him, and he pointed out that prisons don’t really work when they can just be broken out of. I guess he can just scare the shit out of Draco, but that won’t really do much except have Draco either move in the shadows or join the dark lord.
vb
2023-07-01 01:14:10 +0000 UTCI still think Tracey got off too easily. But I’m assuming it’s a 3 strikes and you’re out policy here. If she moves against Harry again he will end her. Looking forward to Draco’s comeuppance. His taunts are going to cost him. Loved the action sequence/dialogue between Albus and Harry. Brilliantly well done. Cheers
Robert
2023-07-01 00:54:37 +0000 UTCThis is such a fun story. I love the way that the characters interact and banter. The scene with Harry and Dumbledore is so good. Spoiler Alert: I was expecting Harry to bind Daphne in front of Tracey. I guess that is still an option. Though it's doubly interesting to see that Mrs. Greengrass will be a thing at some point in the future.
zamu
2023-06-30 21:28:52 +0000 UTCHah, I see you caught the Davis bit. Yeah, that mistake is pretty common. Many people confuse her with Roger Davies.
Kevin Thunder
2023-06-30 20:14:00 +0000 UTC