Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Forty Three
Added 2023-06-16 18:42:14 +0000 UTCHi guys, hope you had a good week.
A quick note for ASFAS fans wondering where last weekend's chapter got to - I've delayed it because, as it's the big finale, it didn't read well to have a chapter end midway through the big finish. Instead, this weekend, I'll release both CH53 and CH54 at the same time, so you get the whole big bang. Sorry, I should have communicated that!
In Two Minds world, Fleur's still reeling from date night, while Harry's got reason to be nervous. Meanwhile, what's Voldie up to?
Hope you enjoy this chapter. It's so fun to write Fleur as the mean queen bee of school life. By the end of it, let me know if you feel sorry for Harry's old school rival? Things might worsen for him, if he gets reeled into plans against Harry.
Thanks for your support - I am working on artwork and new stories for you, so hoping to louden things up around here soon.
Comments
She's gonna watch Daphne submitting to Harry finally isn't she? hahah that would be perfect.
Robert
2023-06-26 00:52:01 +0000 UTCAgreed! It might be a painful lesson!
Robert Wilson
2023-06-23 19:02:53 +0000 UTCThanks man - more Draco needling to come for sure. Nice to hear about the dialogue! Dialogue is, thankfully, one of the few things in writing that comes more easily than the others. Although the years of HP fanfic reading and the books helps have really clear characters in my mind and importantly, the reader's mind, which makes dialogue much simpler.
Robert Wilson
2023-06-23 19:02:22 +0000 UTCTracy needs to be taught a lesson badly. If Draco is being the rational one after THAT Newspaper drops... then she really needs to learn.
Robert
2023-06-23 01:33:11 +0000 UTCThis might be my favorite fic right now. The interactions between characters is always so interesting. I'm never bored. I simply love the way you needle Fleur, Draco, and Tracy. I have a devilish desire for Draco and Tracy's hate of Harry to grow to dizzying heights. I love that you wind your fictional characters up. It makes them feel real, and it makes me want to read more. Also, that conversation between Harry and Dumbledore is masterclass. How are you freaking so good with dialogue?
NightFury
2023-06-17 04:07:01 +0000 UTCI lost it when Dumbledore started coughing. Not sure how I feel about the last scene. The power dynamic between the two characters is already so in their favor even factoring in all the crazy shit to try to balance it out.
zamu
2023-06-16 19:04:46 +0000 UTC
