Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Thirty Three
Added 2023-04-07 20:35:43 +0000 UTCHi everyone. Hope you'll have a good weekend and that, wherever you are, the sun is out. I'm still trying to find a minute to start, let alone play, Hogwarts Legacy. One day!
In Harry's world, it's time to mount a rescue attempt. Luckily, he's not going alone. There's nothing like a trip with the lads, even if it isn't quite a night on the town.
Hope you like it. (And yes, you know what's coming next week...)
Comments
I really enjoyed this chapter. It works perfectly with the rewrite chapter you wrote a couple weeks ago. Showing the casualness of Harryโs magical power was really well done. Loved the rescue scene it was one of the funniest serious situations Iโve read. All that was missing was some of Seamusโ pyromania to take down some DEs ๐ The Ron perspective was brilliantly well done as well. Canโt wait to see whatโs next. Iโm guessing either Daphne finally or Hermione. Iโm interested to see how the dynamic would play out between Harry and Hermione, I could see them sleeping together without Harry binding her. She would be the first one already in love with Harry to be bound, could have a different type of effect. Cheers!
Robert
2023-04-11 17:24:43 +0000 UTCi got your point but like I said, the idea can actually make alot of sense in this perticular story to drive it forward whereas it would not have been in some other fanfics. gotta catch em all ๐๐คฃ
Kinggn
2023-04-08 15:56:59 +0000 UTCReally enjoyed the perspective shifts in this chapter. It'll be interesting to see the results of this and whether Harry takes into account his hoovering of all the pretty girls from the dating pool. Seeing what next week will entail, I wonder how it'll affect Hermione. Maybe it won't do anything to her and that would be interesting to see her being able to reproach him and his actions. On the other hand, there are enough works out there with Hermione being special so making her just one of the group would be more than welcome. Though I wouldn't say no to Hermione becoming all Machiavellian about getting more girls bonded to Harry following the logical train of thought that him bonding more would be better for everyone. Having her be more worried about his safety and less about her time with him (after all Harry would always have time for her), so she starts adding girls too quickly pissing off the others (or splitting the group based on good intentions).
zamu
2023-04-08 15:37:39 +0000 UTCI'm not really a fan of the Gotta-Catch-em-all trope with the titles. Why not just have him act like an adult and say that they have an arrangement? Would the public even react negatively when he's the one who can fight back against Voldemort? Heck, the girls with a title could even just have him be a consort if you really want to pursue him marrying them all.
zamu
2023-04-08 15:25:38 +0000 UTCgreat chapter man. I do have a suggestion regarding Harry's marriages. The way you construct this story so far is brilliant with all the love angles, but still only gives Harry only 2 houses (Potter and Black) to claim lordship. which means he can only have two lady wives. Now that you accept the Greengrass offer in the previous chapter and with you indicating Susan to be lady Potter there is no more marriage Harry can offer even if its to form alliances. I'm really interested in the offer Cho makes to Harry and Helena is also a good choice for his wife but because of only having 2 lordships that's not possible. My suggestion is why not do the popular inheritance trope common in the HarryxHarem fanfics and i think now would be the best time for him to go and claim his other lordships i.e. 1. Potter (already have) 2. Black (already have) 3. Peverell (bloodline) 4. Gryffindor (bloodline) 5. Hufflepuff (bloodline) 6. Ravenclaw (succession) 7. Slytherin (right of conquest for defeating voldi) 8. Gaunt (right of conquest for defeating voldi) like i said it's just a suggestion but I think that this idea can make your story more interesting.
Kinggn
2023-04-08 13:26:09 +0000 UTCI think this was the best chapter you've written for this story so far. You really built up the world, and I actually care about some minor characters now. Well done. Thank you for the chap. This story is becoming a favorite of mine.
NightFury
2023-04-08 03:29:42 +0000 UTCI loved this chapter and especially Ron's perspective on everything
DJ Mix
2023-04-08 02:48:53 +0000 UTCHufflepuff numbers! Hah. Great reference, interesting battle, and fun to see the sidekicks in action.
Anon
2023-04-07 23:47:24 +0000 UTC
