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The Most Important Japanese Horror Game You Haven't Played (Sayonara o Oshiete) (Script Preview)

Hello everyone!

Yes, it's finally time for the big one. The biggest of the denpa three: Sayonara o Oshiete, possibly my MOST requested game. This script is still subject to change, but as it is I'm happy with how it's turned out, and I hope y'all enjoy it too.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kjFv4zydVfRAipJivtaCXm2LVoHLXtqIgUEJgwZ4enQ/edit?usp=sharing

See you all again soon when the video is done!

The Most Important Japanese Horror Game You Haven't Played (Sayonara o Oshiete) (Script Preview)

Comments

Thanks so much! You're definitely correct here -- i have a bad habit of using too many negatives. I need to re-record a few lines from my initial voice over session anyways so I will definitely rework this one to be more legible.

Noelle Aman

Great read, I'm looking forward to the completed project! One line I was confused by: "l don't think it's a stretch to say this idea of anthropomorphization is unrelated to similar otaku trends of the time and even now - nor is it all that detached from the cultural concepts bouncing around at the time of otaku being misogynists who prefer these collections of traits to 'real girls', seeking comfort in delusions and art." There's a lot of double-negatives here - you *don't* think it's a *stretch* to say this idea is *un*related to..., *nor* is it *detached* from... - I kinda had to assume what that was saying from context until diagramming it out. Tbf it might be more obvious when spoken out loud, though. Hope that's useful feedback either way!

fohfuu

As one who isn't too deep into this side of Japanese media culture, this has me quite interested and hype for the video

Thecriticofinnocence

heh heh heh............... time for skrunkly (mutsuki)

Yomiko Readman

Super cool!

N K

Just finished reading the script. Great stuff as always!!!

Victoria Vela


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