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NO ELIZABETH, DON'T BITE YOUR HAND OFF LIKE A COYOTE, YOU'LL PROBABLY NEED IT! It's really fun writing Elizabeth's thoughts like this, she's a fun character to get inside of. I used to actually have a "no thought balloons" rule for writing because I wanted to try to convey their thoughts through other means, but these chapters really couldn't be possible without seeing Elizabeth's thoughts. Now I'm just excited to do chapters focusing on other characters and delving into how their thought process works! I think Steg would be a really fun character to focus on later. Anyone you're interested in? Let me know!
See you on Monday!
Comments
I'm missin my girl Suria, but her thought process just might be too hectic... or horny? Hmm... π§
Alysflowers xx
2022-04-18 23:28:50 +0000 UTCOh most definitely want to know the inner workings of Steg.
Goliath
2022-04-15 11:34:18 +0000 UTCGeorgie was the true mastermind behind everything going wrong THE WHOLE TIME lol.
Mr.Bond
2022-04-15 09:54:34 +0000 UTCShe's so obvious about it, my word
AFrickinDwarf
2022-04-15 04:12:04 +0000 UTCOOOOH COME OOOON LIZ DX
Hades Official Channel
2022-04-15 02:43:29 +0000 UTCEXTREMELY interested in hearing Steg's thoughts. You've been fucking phenomenal storytellers so far, and used the inner monologue to fantastic effect!
Sirvandeyxviii
2022-04-15 02:15:18 +0000 UTCI would personally love to know more about Steg! And Suria too! They're both my favorites. :3 so pleeeaaassseeee please give us insight to the inside of Stegs beautiful head ππβ¨
2022-04-15 02:15:07 +0000 UTCI've been liking the internal monologue direction a lot! I would love to see a Coral POV section someday. Georgie, too imo
Kato
2022-04-15 01:28:52 +0000 UTCPretty sure dating coworkers is fine as long as you stay within guidelines. I.e. go for it Lizzie. Clearly dig each other. Why deny what both hearts are yearning for?
Quadrant
2022-04-15 01:23:59 +0000 UTCQuestion, and I mean no disrespect whatsoever, but will we ever see Dakota without his binder? I don't mind either way, nor do I know if it's disrespectful to ask, it's just curiosity since he always has it on or if it'll come into the plot in some way.
Bleuryder
2022-04-15 01:09:00 +0000 UTCSheβs going to need that hand to grab his butt in a minute!
Daniel S
2022-04-15 01:00:21 +0000 UTCI love how this is the perfect combo of wholesome and sexy. I fucking love this story and characters.
FuuMixALot
2022-04-15 00:47:58 +0000 UTC
