Unexpected Affections Ch. 123-127
Added 2026-02-16 03:02:57 +0000 UTCComments
Man, true that!! Poor Hikki. She doesn't have much time to get there before Charli. But she better get April's blessing first; she's gotta know even if she presents herself like this to Ollie, he's never gonna make a move on it. Maybe Margot should cop to Hikki's desires to April as a show of "2nd girlfriend" honesty. Help grease the wheels as it were, but also as a reflection of how well April took Hannah's brutal honesty. Or Ollie could show some awareness of his growing legendary pussy (and ass) pleaser status, and tell April he suspects Hikki has the same intentions and wants April's advice what to do. That might be the best, actually. Give him a little growth, make the introduction different than the others have gone, help April feel even stronger about Ollie that despite al the passes she is giving away, he's still going to her first and hasn't turned into someone else. Anyway, super hot set of chapters, really loving it and the whole cast and can't wait for more!
Keld
2026-02-17 22:46:10 +0000 UTCHikaru doesn't realise the only obstacle is Hikaru not talking to April
Spacecadet5380
2026-02-17 10:26:12 +0000 UTC"do her best impression of a pocket pussy while he fucks her silly" "fuck my asshole like a Fleshlight" Damm do you have an incredible way with words! Would of liked nore detail on fucking Hannah in the butt, but it was still hot. Cant wait to read more!
Robin Holden
2026-02-16 17:12:17 +0000 UTCI think Charli is the only crack in an otherwise perfect story. She asked to stay with him and then never spoke with him again until she showed up on his doorstep? No "pick me up at the airport" or "I'll just uber there"? No conversation with the other girls about her? She just seems kinda forgotten about and then shoehorned in. Having said that, LOVED seeing Hannah finally get what she wanted!
Mikhail Chelpon
2026-02-16 14:57:59 +0000 UTCWow! Nothing is going as expected, but everyone is here for it, both we and the characters ;) Edit suggestion She was still silently kicking herself, because Hannah had totally seen and heard more than she would have in Margot hadn’t been trying to give Hikaru a show to watch. - in -> if, is enough I believe. At first I thought it was more that needed to be changed, but maybe not?
HN
2026-02-16 11:16:58 +0000 UTCIf charlis gets in before Hikaru we riot!!!! But also what a chapter
SovietDegendays
2026-02-16 09:35:11 +0000 UTC"And that also meant Olivr couldn’t go to Margot’s" a missing "e" in Oliver.
Gregg Hagerty
2026-02-16 04:35:35 +0000 UTCI kind of feel like at this point the real obstacle between Ollie and Hikki is this conviction that Ollie will reject her. Ollie has basically rejected all of the women; he doesn't believe he's attractive and every time responds by asserting that they can't want him like that. Every woman he's had sex with has been the result of that woman and April telling him that he should have sex with her. Seriously, what's going to happen? If Hikki asks April for permission and April grants it and tells Ollie to have sex with her, what is Ollie going to say? "Sorry Hikki, you're totally unfuckable, uniquely unattractive among all my female friends." Never in a million years is Ollie going to be able to let the sort of insult pass his lips, particularly given how untrue it is. He might try to say he's not interested in her or doesn't think of her that way, but the moment she (or Margot if Hikki is too shy or hurt) challenges him on the reason and asks if he thinks she's not sexy, he's going to admit that he absolutely finds her sexy.
Jamison Lovely
2026-02-16 04:10:11 +0000 UTCNoting before I read, you know my 5k is going to this this month, though I assume the burnout means it will be a different batch. EDIT: Picked something different from the list because of the burnout, so maybe next month.
Zaralith
2026-02-16 03:09:13 +0000 UTC
