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AMA: The Boyfriend Ch. 503.5-506

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The therapist being surprised is pretty spot on for how i feel too. I feel like Cattie, Wanda and Becca are the 'main core' who all but NEED Robbie and absolutely should be in the orgy-lationship after the vacation but 8 is crazy in two weeks and some of the others...for example i think it would have been completely fine for Zenya to leave the vacation still undecided and seriously considering her future and then the Heather situation happens and her mama-bear reaction to it makes her REALISE that she actually really really deeply cares for not just Robbie but also the girls so she signs on for the love palace slightly later (way later than we are at the time of writing this, post-'anti terrorism counter strike' for sure). I would genuinely like there to be some crazy reason for why things are going so fast, i struggle to be immersed sometimes because having most of a full vacation load of women all fall in love with Robbie when he doesn't seem to have any special power beyond being very loveable is crazy. Robbie's perks don't touch on love at all, nothing he has should be making people fall in love with him like this....there must be SOMETHING going on.

Tee Kay

I really liked this chapter. Looking forward to more.

Matthew Adams

Enjoyable, but glad there is another 15k coming in thr next 4 days....can't wait for Cassidy to eat a cream pie from Siena or Day

Robin Holden

Something similar happened in a different AMA storyline, and as I recall, the other user agreed to a detente, since she was not able to directly affect the main character. Still, collateral damage is certainly in the cards!

2Charlie

Cassidy confirming she bought perk (Franchise Player) for Robbie immediately after their conversation aligns with the changes in how Robbie interacts with Vera & Ada —prior to the perk he described a mind fogging effect when near Vera & Ada. I’m still sticking with my guess that Ada is the (frustrated) App user.

Bill

Well, let’s hope that 2 App Users meeting isn’t a Highlander situation—there can be only one.

Bill

Jesus after months and months, I needed this chapter so bad. Thank you!

Mikhail Chelpon

Joining the relationship or no, I kind of just want to read a vignette now of Zenya being Sienna’s plus one at the Oscars

ncamferd

Great idea or both Robbie and cassie have it lol.

Jim lynch

I’m looking forward to seeing just how dr carter or her daughter ends up in Robbie’s bed lol. Please listen to our friend KELD and write ten more chapters this week lol as I love this story so very much it’s my number 1 story on here and literotica. Oh if you wondered what my number 2 story is it’s EZZIE THE NEXT GENERATION it’s fantastic.

Jim lynch

Ugh, so good!! Why can't you write like 10 chapters of this a week for us??? lmao Happy to see Terra & Cass back, I think for good? So many great lines and scenes in here. Hopefully the "therapy crowd" guys will be happy to see their scene, and I think it was well done. I think we all probably were right there with Dr. Carter though about the 2.5 weeks thing ... like, REALLY?? That's truly the only thing I think pulls me out of deep engagement with the story when we come across something spelling the timeline out. It's just so silly for the amount of stuff that's happened in that time frame; but it's a minor quibble and I guess we'll just blame it on the app. The only benefit I see of it is that it gives cover to the fact that we might spend 20 chapters without really much interaction with some of the girls, but if it's only been a couple days it's wouldn't be that big a deal in-story for any of them. Speaking of the app, I do think you thread a good line here with that. I love it as a plot device adding some serious intrigue and whatnot, and also love that it doesn't super FEEL like Robbie is just straight MC-fucking every woman he sees, which I assume other stories about this type of thing would devolve into. That would be creep AF for me, but you know how to write love-harem better than anyone I've ever read, so I appreciate that! Having it be Cass's app vs Robbie's was a genious move to avoid that. I also loved the little discussion about the bride & bridesmaids and I think you nailed how most of us probably feel. They were so fun and fuck yeah would be great to get more scenes with them if there were unlimited time, but it's probably for the best that they are "off the table" at this time. Nice sendoff text pic from them ... poor things are ruined for anyone else I'm afraid! Sisi on the otherhand, yeah she's in for sure ... gotta be! Did we call her that before or is that new? I like it, especially the girls calling her that, but wasn't sure if it ever got introduced before Cass just called her that here in this chapter. But if the orgylationship is gonna eventually get a big ole house and start a business and all that, an almost A-lister movie star would go a long way towards making that plausible ... Robbie of course wouldn't want her to provide such an uneven contribution financially, but he'll come around :) Looking forward to the Dayana and Cass and Robbie convo, hopefully that's in this month's batch so we get her settled.

Keld

I’m so happy Cass is back. I love most of the girls but Cass is my favourite! Nice to see Sienna fitting in so well with Cass and Terra and excited to see how the Dayana convo goes. I’m really interested in these therapy sessions and I really like Dr. Samson’s character. Hopefully Cass can find some new age hippie ish therapist that she can vibe with to work through all the shit with.

Adam

I'm guessing the whole "Team Player" is why Robbie avoided the orgy, given that the AMA would certainly explain the whole 'Crazy Russian Widow" stuff.... Excellent work, as always, Break!

2Charlie

Imagine if the App transferred over to Robbie!! What a twist that would be ;-)

Salvo


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