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Quaranteam: North West Ch. 40 (Beta)

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BreaktheBar

Harri drinking a diet cola? Um, no, that ruins the image. Break, Harri needs to get shot again.

Lee

"Most of the ladies around the group, and Leo, didn’t catch on to exactly what I’d just inferred, but Miriam, Laura and Julia all did." Should be "implied" not "inferred"

Mark

Agreed. It almost seems like an “administrative“ chapter. Not moving the ball forward, but a procedural checkcheck in with each character, all done within the context of the story. I pine for the “shit happens” chapters, but they can’t all be like that.

CA2DC

Love seeing this story back on track.

YukonBob

Thanks for the chapter! :)

Darkflint

Wow! Great chapter!

WSV

"the reality of the world around us right now is that Kara, Gerty and I are the only law enforcement" Should be Kyla, yes?

AndyWanKenobi

The sort of chapter that’s needed periodically — can’t tell the players without a scorecard.

ANerdInAnEmptyNest


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